Burning

Desprite for the one I need,
I would die for him I would bleed,
Looking into his eyes as i walk by,
trying not to stumble because i know i will cry,
I was used and confussed by his need,
He didn't care and made me Bleed,
My blood driped all over the floor, 
i feel weak and a little to sore,
Too kind hearted to let go of this,
thinking to much about this  that isn't bliss,
My scars will not heal with him around,
Im moving on with a painfull frown,
woundering if i will ever met the one to turn it upside down,
I will try not to have this pain no more in my life,
making sure my heart is safe and not close to an evil knife.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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July 8, 2011 at 10:59 AM
I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry today BrentLee. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, laughter, and loads of inspiration. Love, Carol
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June 22, 2010 at 10:41 AM
Still a favorite poem BrentLee. Love, Carol
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August 5, 2009 at 5:30 AM
I am reading my favorite poems today and just wanted to let you know this is still a favorite to me . Love, Carol
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