Burlap and Satin

Burlap and satin went to the dance
It was held at the old Fisher Barn
Burlap wore a fine Gunny sack
Adorned with a drawstring of yarn

Satin sported a shimmery weave
Trimmed with buttons of gold
The glossy attire was flawless
And was quite a sight to behold

Burlap took satin by the hand
And together they started to dance
When a stray strand of jute, caught satin’s suit
Burlap did not stand a chance.

Apologies followed
But the damage was done
Satins glossy ensemble 
Had a permanent run.

Their dance quickly ended
Burlap was not Satins ilk
Burlap tangoed with Hemp
Satin went home with silk. 

The moral of the story
And a material fact
Not all fabrics blend
Despite how they act


3/21/2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 4/3/2018 3:52:00 PM
Cute one. I like the ending. Way to go for the contest. Congrats on your creative winning work. Sara
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Kitty Lou
Date: 4/3/2018 8:45:00 PM
Thank You!
Date: 3/31/2018 6:13:00 AM
That is so true and yet so sad. But maybe some things are not made to be and therefore the better. Congratulations on your win, Kai
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Kitty Lou
Date: 3/31/2018 6:47:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 3/30/2018 9:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Kitty, great write! Have a wonderful Easter Hugs Eve
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Kitty Lou
Date: 3/30/2018 10:47:00 PM
Thanks Eve! A blessed Easter to you too!
Date: 3/30/2018 7:47:00 PM
Lovely, what a wonderful take on the challenge. Well done, Kitty.
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Kitty Lou
Date: 3/30/2018 8:14:00 PM
thank you so much!
Date: 3/30/2018 7:40:00 PM
What an adorable fable you have woven (out of burlap and satin..lol !) Loved it !!
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Kitty Lou
Date: 3/30/2018 8:14:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 3/30/2018 7:40:00 PM
Kitty, congratulations on your win for this well-written poem. I like the way you used 'burlap and satin' as characters to present a moral in your lovely rhyme! Very clever. Sandra
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Kitty Lou
Date: 3/30/2018 8:15:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 3/22/2018 6:30:00 PM
This is absolutely precious and so well rhymed and delivered. I love it. I can't tell what date you posted it, but, regardless, it makes no sense that there are no comments on this talented write. It is nice to meet you, and, if new, I hope you read/comment so that you'll get comments - this poem deserves them. I also hope you put it in the contest (if so, you'll need to add the date). I thoroughly enjoyed this frisky, clever poetic romp! All the best ... CayCay
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Kitty Lou
Date: 3/22/2018 8:21:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading and commenting! It is very much appreciated!
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