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Buried Treasure

Castle in the sand

indicates the location

A buried treasure

where once we sat and sunbathed

Lost to a watery grave

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/5/2014 11:52:00 AM

Superb write Theresa ! Congrats on ur win!

Theresa Stephens
Date: 9/10/2014 5:34:00 AM

Thank you Dr. Upma, much appreciate your lovely comment. Regards Theresa xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/5/2014 9:48:00 AM

Love this tanka. Congratulations on your win.

Theresa Stephens
Date: 9/10/2014 5:35:00 AM

Hi Maurice, So kind of you to read and thank you for your comments. Regards Theresa xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/5/2014 8:30:00 AM

Sadness permeates this one but there was joy as well..Way to go with the win..Congrats..Sara

Theresa Stephens
Date: 9/10/2014 5:37:00 AM

Thank you Sara. I am grateful to receive your thoughtful and welcome comments. All the best to you. Theresa xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/4/2014 10:00:00 PM

wow, a great tanka here. Congrats for your HM

Theresa Stephens
Date: 9/10/2014 5:39:00 AM

Hi Andrea, So pleased you liked it and to receive your positive comments and congrats. Bless you. Theresa xx

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/4/2014 7:03:00 PM

Congratulations Theresa. Sandcastles so much fun.

Theresa Stephens
Date: 9/10/2014 5:42:00 AM

Hi Brenda, Thank you very much for reading and, as I live by the sea in Wales, sandcastles are a sure sign of a fun day spent. Regards Theresa xx

Jan Allison

Date: 9/4/2014 4:38:00 PM

many congrats on your honourable mention Theresa:-) hugs Jan xxx

Theresa Stephens
Date: 9/10/2014 5:44:00 AM

Hi Jan, I do appreciate your very welcome comments. Thank you for reading and your continual support. All the best to you. Theresa xx

Jan Allison

Date: 8/29/2014 6:45:00 AM

Oh i love the imagery here - great tanka:-) hugs jan xx

Theresa Stephens
Date: 9/10/2014 5:45:00 AM

A big hug back to you too xx Theresa

Theresa Stephens
Date: 8/29/2014 7:01:00 AM

Thank you Jan. Much appreciate your lovely comment. Regards Theresa xx

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