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Cold snow covered all tombs and lanes, Still he strewed the coffin with sprays of flowers, to lessen his pains. He uttered a few words of praise. But snow showers Buried flowers. He recited poetic strains Could only look down in a daze. Hot tears fell upon her remains Yet snow veiled all in a cold haze, Irked and harried, All sprays buried.

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Valsa George

Date: 1/11/2022 4:10:00 AM

I can feel his grief, the sorrow of one made companion less. But there is no pain, time cannot erase. This winter scene tugs at my heart.

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/25/2021 8:22:00 AM

Beautiful flow and heartwrenching ~

Eve Roper

Date: 9/16/2021 8:53:00 PM

Beautiful poetry with great imagery , meaningful and heartbreaking

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 9/15/2021 4:51:00 PM

Sad hearted words Victor, though the sprays were buried beneath the snow showers, all that matters is that he gave her flowers… Hugs, Belle

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/15/2021 10:56:00 AM

- Deeply touching, Victor ... lovely written, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 9/15/2021 1:31:00 AM

Poignant write Victor...Delice

W.A. Cholt

Date: 9/14/2021 3:43:00 PM

A deep and touching poem.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/14/2021 1:43:00 PM

I really like this, Victor. Great writing.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 9/14/2021 11:50:00 AM

So beautifully penned, touching and sad. This poem is a fave. Blessings.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/14/2021 8:16:00 AM

Very expressive and emotive work. It would be hard to have to bury one's love or close family in the dead of winter where there was snow. Enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/14/2021 6:42:00 AM

Lovely and heartfelt. ~ hugs

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/14/2021 6:02:00 AM

Stunning heartfelt sad poem, you captured the remembrance moment excellently, Victor. Love is everlasting, because we all are going that same Path. Peace and blessings to your heart

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/14/2021 5:45:00 AM

Much love for the departed in these buries flowers. Elegantly evoked, Victor.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/14/2021 12:58:00 AM

A sad scene Victor that many of us can relate to. Tom

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/13/2021 11:06:00 PM

So sad... May God's grace fill you and His love and peace sustain you. God bless you with love, Gina

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 9/13/2021 11:02:00 PM

"Don't cry for me" she whispered, Though he heard it as a breeze "The snows of earth will surely melt, on grass, on grave and tree's." Within his cloud of witnesses, they urged him, "Victor; onward gaze, the Son of God is shining past this world's vapored haze." He heard it as a brush of wind across this gloomy place, as snowflakes melted, merged with tears, fell down his sorrowed face. Home again and lonely, He wrote a poem to share, his friends began to read it, lifting him in prayer. ~B.J.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/15/2021 4:53:00 PM

Lovely BJ… Belle

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 9/13/2021 10:26:00 PM

Love is eternal, surviving though body perishes, beautifully penned, Victor

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/13/2021 10:15:00 PM

Hi Victor, You have penned such heartfelt sad write. I found it moving as well. Have a evening my friend-Alexis

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/13/2021 9:51:00 PM

Stunningly poignant and touching, Victor, a fave:)