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Buried Dreams

I dig deep,
to hell it seems...
to find a buried broken dream.
I lean into the shovel's blade,
and hit a promise long since made.
Sweaty brow and blistered fingers,
my adolescent fear still lingers.
I grasp this dream,with fingers bent,
and think about the time I'd spent.
Then just a boy, now old and gray,
life, how it quickly slips away...
I lay my dream out on the table,
like a candle nearly burned,
but not before I try once more,
with wisdom slowly earned...
With hindsight 20/20,
and a mirror looking back,
surely now my mind,
can separate the
fiction from the fact...
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/29/2014 9:04:00 AM
Congratulations, I like your poem.
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Date: 1/29/2014 9:31:00 AM
Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it...
Date: 1/29/2014 6:37:00 AM
Wonderful poem and congrats on the fine win, Cole
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Cole Banner
Date: 1/29/2014 9:31:00 AM
Thank you so much...
Date: 1/29/2014 12:52:00 AM
Well penned Cole! Dreams are hard to give up on especially when they burn so bright. I like how you said to give it another chance but moving forward with more wisdom and insight - that's the way to achieving your dreams.
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Date: 1/29/2014 9:30:00 AM
Thank you so much...
Date: 11/18/2013 6:47:00 PM
Cole, . ;) Congratulation, on your winning fantasy poem... Sending Smiles. *LINDA*
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Date: 11/18/2013 8:59:00 PM
Thank you...
Date: 11/18/2013 12:24:00 AM
Congratulations on the fine win, Cole
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Cole Banner
Date: 11/18/2013 8:59:00 PM
Thank you...
Date: 11/7/2013 11:46:00 AM
Cole, :) CONGRATULATIONS! Enjoyed your win............... Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 11/6/2013 7:39:00 PM
Cole, nicely done.... congrats in Frank's contest.... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 11/4/2013 11:01:00 PM
darkly beautiful in all its shades, cole... sweet congrats and huggs!..:)
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Cole Banner
Date: 11/5/2013 7:30:00 AM
Thank you. I'm glad you liked it...
Date: 11/4/2013 9:57:00 PM
Congrats on the win in the contest of Frank, Cole
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Cole Banner
Date: 11/5/2013 7:30:00 AM
Thank you so much....
Date: 11/4/2013 7:47:00 PM
You had something to say and said it well. I liked it. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Cole Banner
Date: 11/4/2013 9:01:00 PM
Thank you Joyce. Glad you lked it!
Date: 11/4/2013 6:41:00 PM
cryptically captivating... I congratulate you on your placement in the contest...I worked up a sweat just reading it... Nice writing my friend...... Jake
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Cole Banner
Date: 11/4/2013 9:01:00 PM
Jake, I like to hear from anyone who enjoys my writing. Thanks...

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