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Buried Beneath

When the moon smiled crimson weakness departs... Set, you're the storm darkly clouding skies across a red desert stained in an ancient evil being one spawned recoiled serpent deceiver under the sands hides bringing disorder mixed with violence creating war destroying all good where nothing else matters... I turn around looking into your eyes soulfully held captive with shadows helplessly falling to the knees as watchful eyes dart to old desires pulsing ruby red, perfect prey captured and held forever in her clutches drags hearts to their fates... Sapphire seas churn, storms pass the centuries light years from now when the breathless flame burns blue an eclipse totally takes over the heart once upon a time weakness you fall by the way side as strength is held within a union of crowns for she reigns as queen of the heart owns every key to my demise... Buried beneath the sands and times forgotten names and dates written on the surface by her finger, then blown away on the same winds she rides, free to prowl once more. (A collaboration by Liam McDaid & Kelly Deschler)

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Date: 1/9/2020 12:55:00 AM
This is a great poem! I've went back and read a lot of your work. You are very talented! Thank you for commenting on one of mine so I could find your work! :)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/24/2020 5:55:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment so kindly on my poems ... Its really nice to know that you are enjoying them Timothy :)
Date: 9/28/2017 12:57:00 AM
Very nice romantic piece from the both of you :) thanks for reading my Ain't Nobody's Business :)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/5/2017 7:05:00 PM
You're welcome, Debbie...and thank you for your nice comments. Both Liam and I appreciate them very much :)
Date: 12/5/2016 8:24:00 PM
Wow, what a beautiful romantic tale, great Collab!!!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/10/2017 6:47:00 PM
Both Liam and I appreciate your kind comments on our poem. We're glad you enjoyed it, Arthur :)
Date: 12/5/2016 1:04:00 AM
You two have created a masterpiece. I am awed by this precious poem. Going in my fav list.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/2/2017 3:11:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comments, Afzal. Both Liam and I appreciate them very much and the fav :)
Date: 9/5/2016 4:04:00 AM
Hi Kelly, passionately and soulfully written. Dark and dangerous and beautiful
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 9/23/2016 2:03:00 PM
Hi Jannie, thank you once again for your nice comments. I appreciate you taking the time to do so :)
Date: 8/28/2016 9:21:00 AM
A superb collaboration from two great poets...Kelly and Liam...A7+A7...god bless...^WW^
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 9/16/2016 5:46:00 PM
Thank you for the double 7 rating, WW! Both Liam and I appreciate your nice comments on our poem :)
Date: 8/23/2016 3:06:00 AM
Deep and dark write. Well penned. thanks for sharing it.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 9/8/2016 7:15:00 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting so kindly, Ravi :)
Date: 8/22/2016 1:40:00 AM
I don't usually like collaborations Kelly but this one is good, I mean, I like them but I mainly like poetry written by one person alone as you can't really say that it is your own, anyway this is a brilliant one so congrat's to you and Liam and take care my dear, nice to see you on FB........Vera
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 9/8/2016 6:50:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on our collaboration, Vera... Seeing you and Peter on FB is a joy!... Writing with another poet is really fun to do and it pushes you to be more creative. It requires a lot of give and take, but the final result is well worth it. And, the credit for the poem is always mutual, which is something special to share with another poet :)
Date: 8/18/2016 10:21:00 PM
Wow for the both or you on this collaboration! Your poem builds and builds and ends n the last two lines that conclude in an explosion of subtle power! Truly wonderful! 7 ; )
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 9/1/2016 12:46:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment so kindly on this poem, Connie... Both Liam and I appreciate that very much :)
Date: 8/16/2016 12:54:00 PM
one big wow for the two of you, kelly... love the mystery and flow that spill from this splendid collab!..huggs
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/30/2016 9:58:00 PM
Your kind comments are much appreciated by both Liam and myself... Thank you for taking the time to read our poem, Nette ...hugs :)
Date: 8/13/2016 1:00:00 PM
I thought I would call in and pay my regards, Kelly. An interesting poem...I really do enjoy reading this particular type of subject. It imparts the kind of imagery and makes use of the sort of language that my favourite poet, W.B Yeats, employed to such impressive effect in his work: Mysticism and legend flavoured with supernatural events. Very nicely done! My very best, Kelly...And my warmest wishes as always. :) john
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/30/2016 9:43:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment so kindly on this poem, John. That is always appreciated... I am not familiar with W. B. Yeats. I will have to look him up. His work sounds like something I would like to read very much :)
Date: 8/11/2016 3:47:00 PM
An intriguing write Kelly...enjoyed...
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/30/2016 9:24:00 PM
Thank you for reading, Joseph. I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
Date: 8/9/2016 8:13:00 AM
- A really deep, dark writing from you Kelly and Liam - A wonderful work - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/30/2016 9:11:00 PM
Thank you once again for your nice comments, Anne-Lise... Both Liam and I appreciate them very much :)
Date: 8/8/2016 6:39:00 PM
must say kelly this is one heck of a piece your pen flowed the golden mix in this write passing you a warm smile thank you pal for the pleasure of joining ink
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/5/2016 8:26:00 PM
You two did a great job, I thoroughly enjoyed this fine piece of poetry! Great to catch up on some reading here!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/11/2016 12:46:00 PM
You're welcome, Liam. Its always a great pleasure to write with you each and every time pal :)

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