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Buried

hope breaks despair’s pain
all efforts in time sunken~
take my hand in vain

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Paige Hind

September 12, 2025 at 7:09 PM

A deep poem that I can truly feel-

I Am Anaya

September 20, 2025 at 8:31 AM

I've captured a feeling of despair and hopelessness , my intent. Hope you are alright, Paige sweet poetess. xhugs

Robert Gorelick

September 5, 2025 at 11:25 AM

These three lines presents quite a conundrum. Is all hope buried deeply and smothered? Is the hand truly reaching for naught? Unsettling as we grope our way through despair. Much to ponder! Robert

I Am Anaya

September 12, 2025 at 11:57 AM

Thank you for your acute understanding and constant support! xXHugs

Duke Beaufort

September 5, 2025 at 3:29 AM

Anaya, we hope to be able to enjoy life with each day we have. I think part of it is helping each other. Even if we can't get the result we want, we can at least have fun trying. Smiles!!

I Am Anaya

September 5, 2025 at 11:16 AM

It's all about the journey not the destination, I am reminded of "The Art Of Motorcycle Maintenance" a book I DID read, lol. In this case, what we have now on our plate is precarious and UNCHARTED territories. In this administration can we still be hopeful is the question. Smiles!

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