Burgundy Red

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The burgundy red color is so vibrant and alive in the fall.Sara

Frost has tinged the Japanese Maple Turning its leaves to burgundy red Pears lie upon the ground not staple As roosters rise nosily from bed Nice on the porch at sunrise Feeling the November cold Hear birds chirp tales so wise Mocking tale was a surprise and bold

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Fabiyas M V

Date: 11/13/2011 11:03:00 PM

A nice scene from nature!Beautiful!

Jack Horne

Date: 11/13/2011 12:51:00 PM

I love this atmospheric piece, Sara. We don't have a rooster next door, but it's kind of nice to hear our neighbour's hens clucking. Our Japanese maple has deep red leaves now too

M. Hussain Effendi

Date: 11/13/2011 8:18:00 AM

Nice write on nature, Sara. Just beautiful!

Kash Poet

Date: 11/13/2011 6:47:00 AM

Wonderful imagery here.Enjoyed very much.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/12/2011 10:51:00 PM

ANOTHER WONDERFUL POEM DEAR SARA,.. I CAN IMAGINE THE BEAUTY... TREATED PERFECTLY..... Enjoyed your poem~ Thank you for sharing. Have yourself a wonderful night.. Take care ;-) ..LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/12/2011 8:40:00 PM

This is lovely,Sara. I see you must enjoy writing about what you see outside your own back door!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/12/2011 6:33:00 PM

Sweet write! I love the Japanese Maple tree! Oh and if you are on the farm, you must have some roosters! A great alarm clock(although they aren't as accurate as one might think!)! Outstanding work!!

Tony Lane

Date: 11/12/2011 6:00:00 PM

Nicely written Sara. Tony