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Burgundy

Burgundy persuades me And my eyes set forth to dance She appears to move effortlessly A captive to romance I take her gentle hand Which feels weightless straight from heaven We move as one as lovers can With grace none can imagine She smiles with her eyes, her whole Matching my feelings without a fault And so elegantly we stroll Swaying with the winds timeless waltz I'm nearly swept, carried away By the touch of this burgundy beauty Falling towards a comatose state When her eye's sparkle catches me Perfection is the only word That comes into my mind As thinking is quite absurd When this love is purely mine I want to drown in a red sea As I have in her dark eyes I want to dance forever in this feeling This burgundy feeling I hope never dies

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/22/2010 2:21:00 PM
very nice write
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Date: 8/11/2010 12:36:00 PM
Very nice and lovely to read. Great write! Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my poem. Caroline.
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Date: 8/10/2010 2:03:00 PM
Smile ~ Burgandy is a very beautiful colour and love, is the most beautiful colour of all and, this is "A Very Beautiful Poem Dear Destiny" ~ I am very glad to have read this warm and wonderfully flowing artistic gem ~ "Very Beautiful" ~ "My Love & Warmth Always, to You & Your Loves," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Burgandies Love Filled Day;" Bye Dear Destiny!:) ~
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Date: 8/10/2010 12:31:00 PM
Another day of fasinating reading ahead of me I see. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us Destiny. I enjoyed reading your beautiful poetry today. Wishing you the best always. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/10/2010 12:15:00 PM
DESTINY, Thanx's U 4 a wOnderful. POem. A nice way tO EXPRESS wOrds * luv~ SKAT
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Date: 8/10/2010 12:14:00 PM
Hello Destiny, enjoyed your little feeling of love. Have a nice one,..p.d.
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