Burden Bird

The burden bird’s wings in flight,									
a duty none should bear										
its weight never fair. 										
Although these wings 											
a stalwart agent, 											
is it enough to continue this fight?

An unfair question 											
to say the least, 											
the bully burden bird 											
does not cease. 											
It is a true beast.

A relentless creature, 											
a creation by one’s self 											
but one can’t help. 											
A hostile hammer 											
a continuing beat,											
there is no sleep. 

The fatigue is real 											
from this self imposed state,										
oh please oh please 											
if only it would retreat.

Forward the burden bird’s flight									 
with an altitude now lower. 										
This birds journey to finally end 									
when there are flowers.

Only to know 
if comes departed or celebration
wings will need to soar 
bringing true salvation.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
February 11, 2026 at 2:41 PM
liked the 'burden bird' metaphor--added depth to your words
Gwyn Avatar
February 11, 2026 at 3:29 PM
thx Sara!!!
Nicole Avatar
February 5, 2026 at 11:19 AM
If ' burden ' is placed on the wings of a bird, it will slowly fall to the ground. So sad, indeed. A bird is meant to embrace the sky. Feel the wind and fly. We belong in those carefree moments as well. Many wonderful blessings to you, Bruce. Hugs, Brandy
Gwyn Avatar
February 6, 2026 at 10:38 AM
Thx Brandy!
Nicole Avatar
February 6, 2026 at 10:07 AM
Bruce, the added verse you've placed fits perfectly at the end of your words. : ) I agree with you, we all need hope. My heart is floating. : )
Gwyn Avatar
February 6, 2026 at 5:59 AM
Hi Brandy Your comments about my poem have had my mind thinking lol. I have added one more verse…..we all need hope Cheers Bruce
Gwyn Avatar
February 5, 2026 at 2:06 PM
Thx Brandy! Birds are wonderful and should always soar...the weight of burden can be so great it can even lower these beautiful creatures flight to the ground. Thanks and Best, Bruce
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