Bunny Rabbit

My bunny rabbit is so bold,
always wanting out.
From the hutch I keep it in,
since it got so stout.

Sits there wriggling it's fluffy ears,
and the tip of its pinky nose.
He's such a rolly polly guy,
and knows it I suppose.

Just like me he can't resist
temptation in his way.
Munches through four carrots,
then lays down in the hay.

I'm tempted now to let him out,
just to watch him play.
Brush his long shaggy hair.
But then I know he'll stay.

Because I can't resist him,
and the joy he brings to me.
All evening now we'll cuddle up,
on the sofa and watch T.V.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 4/30/2016 2:35:00 PM
Its been a while I visited.. I have also not been online for a while due to my work but I am back now and this piece is just the perfect start I need to come back home to my wonderful poetrysoup. This is amazing, beautiful and a high seven! Well done friend
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Jean Murray
Date: 5/1/2016 3:47:00 AM
I'll put the kettle on Funom.
Date: 4/27/2016 12:17:00 AM
Darling, sweet write, filled with fun and love! Enjoyed the read :)
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Jean Murray
Date: 4/27/2016 1:26:00 AM
Thank you Laura.
Date: 4/26/2016 2:35:00 PM
- Sweet Bunny rabbit :) - hugs // Sun :)
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Jean Murray
Date: 4/26/2016 2:39:00 PM
Thank you Sun.
Date: 4/26/2016 1:42:00 PM
Brings back memories. In my younger days, I raised rabbits, of which everyone become a house pet. My last little guy - Fefferneuse is my profile pic. Thanks for the memories. DMB
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Jean Murray
Date: 4/26/2016 2:00:00 PM
Sorry DM that reply was meant for Jan. That little one is so cute.
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Jean Murray
Date: 4/26/2016 1:58:00 PM
Strange you should say that Jan...............so did I. And I never had a pet rabbit.....
Date: 4/26/2016 1:33:00 PM
aww cute Jean I wrote a poem about a rabbit once lol will say no more hee hee but it sure wasn't a fluffy one lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jean Murray
Date: 4/26/2016 2:00:00 PM
Strange you should say that Jan............so did I. And I never had a pet rabbit...
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