Bunny

I saw a bunny one day Hopping out a little to play Eating up shoots Filling their boots Too far away From their burrow they did not stray But more adventure awaits Beyond their imaginary gates So why not go An observer wanted to know To have some fun In the sun Why do they stay Instead of running away Why is their life on hold Instead of being bold Only the bunny knows Why they wont go But who are you Are you a bunny too

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/31/2020 9:03:00 AM

A wise bunny. ;0)

Frances Byrne
Date: 3/31/2020 9:10:00 AM

Hi Richard, Written from experience :) Frances

Ann Foster

Date: 10/17/2019 9:16:00 PM

Very thought ful... indeed... I am unclear... I have fuzzy feet and my nose twitches.. when I get near carrots...but... I also long to go and go... Hugs. Fun write. Lots of talent. Ann

Frances Byrne
Date: 10/18/2019 7:11:00 AM

Hi Ann, Thanks for your comments, I love your description of yourself, lol Frances

Niall Fulham

Date: 9/30/2019 7:31:00 AM

Hi Frances. Beautiful write my friend, I love writes that have a deeper meaning. I would say that many people could relate to this one my friend. :)))))))Hugs

Frances Byrne
Date: 9/30/2019 7:51:00 AM

Hi Niall, Thanks for you lovely insightful comments, Frances