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bunch of orchids hanging on gold ribbons... college prom date Regina Riddle's Haiku Aha Moment 8/2/2014

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Date: 10/7/2014 6:10:00 PM
Nice write.
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Date: 9/3/2014 3:01:00 PM
if this IS senior prom..(not a habit we know in the netherlands) then it MUST be beyond awesome.. as this haiku IS.
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Date: 8/9/2014 3:30:00 PM
Congratulations, Nette: very pretty image. Orchids can look so classy,,,as you are dear,
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Date: 8/9/2014 3:27:00 PM
Aww cool :) great win!
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Date: 8/8/2014 11:40:00 AM
- Congratulations on your Haiku "Aha" Moment - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/8/2014 1:03:00 AM
Great imagery creating a nice scene, nette. congrats
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Date: 8/7/2014 11:54:00 PM
hey, here you are again tonight right where you should be , on a winners' list. Congratulations.
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Date: 8/7/2014 2:32:00 PM
Beautiful imagery with hidden aha moment. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 8/6/2014 6:53:00 PM
that is a very sweet AHA!! She is getting so many cute poems. WIsh i had thought of her idea for one of my contests.
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Date: 8/6/2014 6:53:00 PM
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Date: 8/6/2014 1:26:00 PM
oh what a lovely scene..who can ever forget that night?!.... when one ugly duckling became the most beautiful swan in a prom night...nice catch, nette! ^_^
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Date: 8/4/2014 11:07:00 PM
Takes me back..thank you Nette
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Date: 8/4/2014 5:48:00 PM
Oh yes........I remember those days.....such a lovely take on this contest, Nette! (and Ps.....a big thank you for a new form challenge, and thank you so much for my placement! A nice surprise!!)
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Date: 8/4/2014 1:15:00 AM
Wonderful haiku. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 8/3/2014 7:37:00 PM
if you shrink the width down on the art in your contest page the rest of the words will show - [above is she requiring 5/7/5?] Light & Love
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Date: 8/3/2014 10:45:00 AM
This haiku is as nice as orchids, Nette.
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Date: 8/3/2014 2:12:00 AM
That shift in your haiku---enchantingly unexpected; I remember how clumsy I was that prom night. This is a memorable poem, Nette!
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Date: 8/2/2014 7:19:00 PM
love your poem but far to many years for me to remember
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Date: 8/2/2014 6:02:00 PM
How wonderful.. I remember the prom...hugs Tim
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Date: 8/2/2014 5:39:00 PM
Ahh!! That must have been delightful..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visit to my page.. Sara
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Date: 8/2/2014 4:51:00 PM
Ow yes what a beautiful image..I love it and its Aha moment : )
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Date: 8/2/2014 2:01:00 PM
Terrific image here. The orchids swinging capture the anticipation of a date with a sense of excitement and nervousness ( dangling on ribbons) is a the true quality of a haiku!
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Date: 8/2/2014 1:37:00 PM
Endearingly delightful, for these Orchids I give. Now onto the 'Prom' young lives to now live. Love it 'Nette' simply dreamy poetry, your 'Prince' James x
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Date: 8/2/2014 1:14:00 PM
Nette, this little gem stirs a world of yesteryear with in.. What a Saturday morning gift.. Thank you !
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Date: 8/2/2014 1:06:00 PM
- So beautiful haiku, Nette !!! - My B-day - I was sitting on a plane home from Turkey for 5 hours - hot! - And tired .... lol. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/2/2014 1:31:00 PM
- My grandchildren baked cake and gave me homemade B-day cards yesterday - Really cute card with many red hearts - and loving words - Love them much !!!! - Thank you,Dave !!!
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Date: 8/2/2014 1:16:00 PM
Anne-Lise, today is your birthday. Sorry for a tough flight. Hope you get candles, cake, and a nice long foot massage!
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