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Uranus, arsenal and album All three referring to our rear chasm Sometimes smelly Like a goat's underbelly But often causing painful spasms

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Patricia Cresswell

Date: 9/24/2017 6:00:00 PM

Take care of yourself!

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/24/2017 8:56:00 PM

Of course I am concerned! Who will bring me a smile why my morning tea?

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/24/2017 6:58:00 PM

Thanks for your concern!!! xxx

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 9/24/2017 8:00:00 AM

Spasms and chasms with pizzazz//whistling dixie and all that jazz//jiggling jelly//inside the belly//can end with a pain in the azz. (!) BUMS AWAY JAKSON!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/24/2017 8:44:00 AM

This one's right UP your chasm eh!!! Love writing about chasms!!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/24/2017 7:20:00 AM

Hmmm, Painful spasms? You might need to see a doctor about that my friend! This is a very proficient write! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this morning! What a grandiose piece, Great Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/24/2017 8:45:00 AM

Doctor's office has become a second home to me... kiss all the nurses when we greet!!! YUM!!!