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Bumblebees

bumblebees
flit from flower to flower --
a soft breeze blows

3/13/12 by Kim Merryman
for PD's  "Favorite or Best Haiku" contest

natureflowerflowerhaiku

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Gail Debole

Date: 7/7/2012 8:24:00 AM

Hi Kim - This elicits images of a beautiful summer day. Thank you for your encouraging words about my poetry. Enjoy your weekend. - Gail

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 3/24/2012 1:10:00 PM

congratulations on your win! a pretty scene :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/23/2012 5:25:00 AM

While stopping by to read your wonderful poetry I want to say thank you for the kind comments you have left on mine. I hope you have a beautiful weekend and find it full of inspiration Kim. Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/22/2012 5:23:00 PM

Celebrating this winning haiku, Kim...I love bumblebees and the MOMENT you captured...I just have to keep my distance from them. ha ha. Glad u enjoyed my mVA poem...all smiles here. Love, Gwendolen

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 3/19/2012 1:34:00 PM

So sweet. I love bumblebees and I love this poem! Always, Laura

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/19/2012 6:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Haiku" contest Kim. Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/19/2012 1:54:00 AM

I could just imagine that bumblee buzzing and flitting from flower to flower, very nice, Kim! :D

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/18/2012 5:13:00 PM

So easy breezy this one reads!! Congrats, sweet Kim.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/16/2012 9:16:00 PM

congrats Kim on another amazing win for this wonderful write luv..

Erich Goller

Date: 3/16/2012 8:47:00 PM

Thank God for the bees, I love their honey, a lovely Haiku.. Thanks for sharing it. God bless you. Hugs!Erich

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/16/2012 5:28:00 PM

wonderful Kim. harry

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/16/2012 8:22:00 AM

Congrats, Kim. Excellent write. Enjoyed. Nice going, my friend. luv and hugs, Ralphie

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/16/2012 12:44:00 AM

a winner it is,kim... my sweet congrats!...:) huggs!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/15/2012 10:51:00 PM

KIM, ~.Congratulations in my haiku contest ;-) THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest... Enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/15/2012 8:47:00 PM

Cute as can BEE

Tracy Edwards

Date: 3/15/2012 6:15:00 AM

Oh lovely..no wonder its your fav Ku'.. Hugs xxx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/14/2012 6:37:00 PM

Enjoyed this one..The bumble bees are already out here as are wasps and yellow jackets..They scare me for their sting is very painful and can be fatal..Reads like winning material that you have written..Good luck in the contest..Sara

Deck Fitzgerald

Date: 3/14/2012 3:47:00 PM

Loved the gentle imagery Kim best wishes in the contest , Declan xxx

Ann Roske

Date: 3/14/2012 11:22:00 AM

Yes Kim - I see those little guys.. very nice picture you draw.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/14/2012 10:01:00 AM

Kim,. , good afternoon. :-) ,lol..my x must have been the king of bumblebeed.. ooo, and this is for my contest.. smooth one..love it..God bless ¤ always PD

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