Bumblebees

bumblebees
flit from flower to flower --
a soft breeze blows

3/13/12 by Kim Merryman
for PD's  "Favorite or Best Haiku" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Debole Avatar
July 7, 2012 at 8:24 AM
Hi Kim - This elicits images of a beautiful summer day. Thank you for your encouraging words about my poetry. Enjoy your weekend. - Gail
Susan Avatar
March 24, 2012 at 1:10 PM
congratulations on your win! a pretty scene :)
Brown Avatar
March 23, 2012 at 5:25 AM
While stopping by to read your wonderful poetry I want to say thank you for the kind comments you have left on mine. I hope you have a beautiful weekend and find it full of inspiration Kim. Love, Carol
Song Avatar
March 22, 2012 at 5:23 PM
Celebrating this winning haiku, Kim...I love bumblebees and the MOMENT you captured...I just have to keep my distance from them. ha ha. Glad u enjoyed my mVA poem...all smiles here. Love, Gwendolen
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March 19, 2012 at 1:34 PM
So sweet. I love bumblebees and I love this poem! Always, Laura
Brown Avatar
March 19, 2012 at 6:14 AM
Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Haiku" contest Kim. Love, Carol
K. Avatar
March 19, 2012 at 1:54 AM
I could just imagine that bumblee buzzing and flitting from flower to flower, very nice, Kim! :D
Dietrich Avatar
March 18, 2012 at 5:13 PM
So easy breezy this one reads!! Congrats, sweet Kim.
Sweetheart Avatar
March 16, 2012 at 9:16 PM
congrats Kim on another amazing win for this wonderful write luv..
Goller Avatar
March 16, 2012 at 8:47 PM
Thank God for the bees, I love their honey, a lovely Haiku.. Thanks for sharing it. God bless you. Hugs!Erich
Horsman Avatar
March 16, 2012 at 5:28 PM
wonderful Kim. harry
Taylor Avatar
March 16, 2012 at 8:22 AM
Congrats, Kim. Excellent write. Enjoyed. Nice going, my friend. luv and hugs, Ralphie
Onclaud Avatar
March 16, 2012 at 12:44 AM
a winner it is,kim... my sweet congrats!...:) huggs!
A   Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 10:51 PM
KIM, ~.Congratulations in my haiku contest ;-) THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest... Enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD
Dietrich Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 8:47 PM
Cute as can BEE
Edwards Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 6:15 AM
Oh lovely..no wonder its your fav Ku'.. Hugs xxx
Kendrick Avatar
March 14, 2012 at 6:37 PM
Enjoyed this one..The bumble bees are already out here as are wasps and yellow jackets..They scare me for their sting is very painful and can be fatal..Reads like winning material that you have written..Good luck in the contest..Sara
Fitzgerald Avatar
March 14, 2012 at 3:47 PM
Loved the gentle imagery Kim best wishes in the contest , Declan xxx
Roske Avatar
March 14, 2012 at 11:22 AM
Yes Kim - I see those little guys.. very nice picture you draw.
A   Avatar
March 14, 2012 at 10:01 AM
Kim,. , good afternoon. :-) ,lol..my x must have been the king of bumblebeed.. ooo, and this is for my contest.. smooth one..love it..God bless ¤ always PD
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