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Bumblebees

Fat bumblebees work on pink hydrangea blossom. Pollen-stuffed britches. Days grow shorter, blossoms fade. Honey enough for the winter?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/9/2012 8:56:00 PM
this is adorable!!! Fall bumblebees!! Congrats.
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Date: 5/7/2012 2:40:00 PM
Great Tanka..Descriptive and factual at the same time..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 5/7/2012 12:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the "Enchantment of Fall" contest Frances. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/22/2009 6:04:00 AM
excellent bzzzz--charma
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Date: 8/19/2009 4:12:00 PM
Nice imagery in this write..good work.
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Date: 8/19/2009 10:03:00 AM
Light and lively write you have here Frances. Excellent. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/19/2009 7:14:00 AM
Nicely written. I like the line pollen-stuffed britches. Keep writing. Sara
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