Bumblebees

bumblebees buzzing
in clover fields
all's right with the world



AP: Honorable Mention 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ashley Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 9:23 PM
Indeed! I love this, Line. Great poem! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Gauthier Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 6:50 AM
Thank you, Susan. Most appreciated.
Krutsinger Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 8:55 PM
I may be the only person in the world who plants clover, but I love it, and so do so many bees, all kinds, and the bunnies love it too. This haiku makes sense in my world.
Gauthier Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 6:50 AM
Thanks, Caren, for your contribution to making the world go round.
Kiser Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 6:28 PM
If only...I hate losing the bees; I pray that they can be saved. Thanks for the thought about the bees. You've painted a love Haiku painting.
Gauthier Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 6:59 PM
Thanks, ML. Big movement to protect them.
Sands Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 10:11 AM
Very nice! :)
Gauthier Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 2:48 PM
Thanks, Heidi. Much appreciated.
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July 23, 2018 at 10:09 AM
Big smile! :)))
Gauthier Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 2:48 PM
Thanks, Maureen, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
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