Bumble-Bee On Fruits

Bumble-bee on fruits

The silly me
The silly bumble-bee
Bumble-bee buzz in ears
Bumble-bee hovers on flowers
Flowers in Ikebana
Flowers spread fragrance
Fragrance of petrichor
Fragrance of coffee
Coffee with cream
Coffee with beloved
Beloved sent a greeting card
Beloved left to work
Work is worship
Work in a team
Team spirit wonderful
Team of hockey
Hockey is India's national game
Hockey stick is not a bat
Bat is a mammal
Bat and cricket ball
Ball is in your court
Ball room dance so captivating
Captivating sense of humour
Captivating talent show
Show your skill
Show of bike
Bike ride jolly
Bike with great capacity
Capacity to climb a mountain
Capacity to convince people
People make democracy possible
People gather to protest
Protest against atrocities on women
Protest in a peaceful way
Way to enlightenment
Way to waterfall
Waterfall largest is Victoria
Waterfall amidst nature
Nature so enchanting
Nature has answers
Answers so spontaneous
Answers witty and brief
Brief legal statement
Brief summer holiday
Holiday in a beach resort
Holiday tasting tropical fruits
Fruits of hard-work is success
Fruits so tasty and pulpy sweet
Sweet
Success!

©Anulaxmi Nayak, 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 9:26 PM
wow, you sure do love this Blitz form. You are gonna become a Blitz queen!! Nicely done.
Nayak Avatar
September 11, 2015 at 5:28 AM
Dear Andrea, oh your words made my soul go merry....thank you so much dear for your visit and your appreciative words.....means a lot to me....loads of love,Anu:-)
Trifiatis Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 7:39 AM
You have become an expert of BLITZ, dear Anulaxmi! From the first line to the last a seven is there for you! Hugs and love!
Nayak Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 7:54 AM
Dear Demetrios, you make my spirits go high....thank you so much...and yes i have started liking blitz as i feel its just putting our thoughts in a flow! ....Loads of love and hugs, Anu:-)
Allison Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 4:55 AM
Wow what an awesome clever blitz I have never tried this form myself Anu:-) hugs Jan xx
Nayak Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 5:01 AM
Dear Jan, i appreciate your visit and words dear....you are so sweet.....hey blitz is very interesting to write...just write your flowing thoughts...blitz will be ready....i am sure you will write wonderful blitz ...do try..loads of love, Anu:-)
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