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Bumblebee and Me

Bumblebee stumbled like a drunk
crossing dry leaf ground
and made for overhanging plant
where sun patch had been found.
Climbing flower like mountain face
bee reached his summit peak, 
there paused to take the warming rays,
feet combing head and cheek.
Bee seeing near three petaled flowers 
dipped in them one by one.
Revived and fueled with warmth and food 
he flew towards the sun.

That morning willed my body sore
towards the edge of bed.
I slowly lowered feet to floor,
thoughts ordered in my head.
With kneeling hassock to both knees,
and seeking daily bread,
I made my morning's prayerful pleas
with word devotions read.
Then standing ready for this day
with heart and mind now one,
my body rises, filled this way,
to glorify of the Son.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 7/14/2020 3:27:00 PM
. 154 Words . Our Very Best . Yes, I am the raw vision, of my true, self wonton, and willing to succeed within this moment infinitely supported and surrendered to all of us, by our Creator! When I dance gratefully under the storms, all that I act upon, that is the hardest to accept about myself, within the mirror of this life, when I do, I am my very own savior. As I suck out, all of the yummy marrow of this life, sharing this with all others! I am the terror, lost when I am not, when, truly, I need for not! I am an ever-evolving creature of our Creator, mistakes, and all! "Saints," they say, can be no more, nor, do anything, more, or less, but; live for another, to share in no personal regrets for, themselves! Yes, just as much as I am willing to grow, as I let go, to learn, I am at my very best!
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