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Bumblebee

Sunlight

Wakens the damp

Wings of my faerie friend's

Journey to my bean-pole blossom's

Magic


12/05/16

gardenmiraclecinquain

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Valsa George

January 28, 2022 at 2:44 AM

This is lovely... ! Congratulations!

James Marshall Goff

January 28, 2022 at 12:56 PM

Thank you Valsa!

Christuraj Alex

January 28, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Beautiful Cinquain. Congratulations!

James Marshall Goff

January 28, 2022 at 12:55 PM

Thanks Christuraj!

Heidi Sands

July 2, 2017 at 7:24 PM

I like this one. A joy to read :)

James Marshall Goff

July 2, 2017 at 10:09 PM

Thank Heidi! the bumblebee is my favorite bee pollinator...as they are quite friendly & even let me pet them

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

December 27, 2016 at 2:00 AM

I love bees and have ever since one sat on my arm as a child and didn't bite me while we were swinging together. I am struggling to do my part to help save the endangered honey bees. I have one healthy hive. (lost one.) I love this sweet bee poem.

Space Cadet

December 7, 2016 at 9:15 PM

Very spacey and trippy. Love it. -- Wesley C.

Space Cadet

December 8, 2016 at 8:51 PM

There is great reward in the moment. And you've captured the attractive perk of spontaneity in the universe of word.

James Marshall Goff

December 8, 2016 at 7:55 AM

Yes...I see it Wesley! Nice! bein' a left-handed gemini...i process time/space in the moment & from a distant universe...like Sun Ra...simultaneously...jim