Bumblebee

Sunlight Wakens the damp Wings of my faerie friend's Journey to my bean-pole blossom's Magic 12/05/16

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Valsa George

Date: 1/28/2022 2:44:00 AM

This is lovely... ! Congratulations!

James Marshall Goff
Date: 1/28/2022 12:56:00 PM

Thank you Valsa!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 1/28/2022 12:00:00 AM

Beautiful Cinquain. Congratulations!

James Marshall Goff
Date: 1/28/2022 12:55:00 PM

Thanks Christuraj!

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/2/2017 7:24:00 PM

I like this one. A joy to read :)

James Marshall Goff
Date: 7/2/2017 10:09:00 PM

Thank Heidi! the bumblebee is my favorite bee pollinator...as they are quite friendly & even let me pet them

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 12/27/2016 2:00:00 AM

I love bees and have ever since one sat on my arm as a child and didn't bite me while we were swinging together. I am struggling to do my part to help save the endangered honey bees. I have one healthy hive. (lost one.) I love this sweet bee poem.

Space Cadet

Date: 12/7/2016 9:15:00 PM

Very spacey and trippy. Love it. -- Wesley C.

Space Cadet
Date: 12/8/2016 8:51:00 PM

There is great reward in the moment. And you've captured the attractive perk of spontaneity in the universe of word.

James Marshall Goff
Date: 12/8/2016 7:55:00 AM

Yes...I see it Wesley! Nice! bein' a left-handed gemini...i process time/space in the moment & from a distant universe...like Sun Ra...simultaneously...jim

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/5/2016 11:53:00 AM

dreamy world you've painted, jimbo!..huggs

James Marshall Goff
Date: 12/6/2016 6:49:00 PM

Thanks Nette, Bumblebees let me get real close, so much fun hangin' out with them in my garden this summer!