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Bumblebee

Buzzing bumblebee you just might be the cutest thing today I've seen. Your black and yellow jacket, awkwardness of flight; Amusing fellow This burly, yellow, fellow that visits different flowers all day long.

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James Fraser

Date: 6/2/2009 2:39:00 PM

Kool insight in the day of the bee, super poem>James

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/2/2009 6:38:00 AM

Great description of the busy bee making his way through all the flowers. Their flight pattern does seem "awkward," though I'm not one to laugh at Mother Nature's stingers. Fun poem, Albert! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/2/2009 5:45:00 AM

I like your poem. It is interesting to have corn planted and go out early in the morning and hear the hum of the bees. Not fun to get stung. I liked the descriptiveness of your wording. Sara