Albert Ahearn Poet Haiku

Bumblebee

Buzzing bumblebee
you just might be the cutest
thing today I've seen. 

Your black and yellow
jacket, awkwardness of flight;
Amusing fellow

This burly, yellow,  
fellow that visits different
flowers all day long.

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James Fraser June 2, 2009 at 2:39 PM Kool insight in the day of the bee, super poem>James

Carolyn Devonshire June 2, 2009 at 6:38 AM Great description of the busy bee making his way through all the flowers. Their flight pattern does seem "awkward," though I'm not one to laugh at Mother Nature's stingers. Fun poem, Albert! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick June 2, 2009 at 5:45 AM I like your poem. It is interesting to have corn planted and go out early in the morning and hear the hum of the bees. Not fun to get stung. I liked the descriptiveness of your wording. Sara