Bullseye - Tb

She aimed for fame
Played the game right
~ Her name in lights




      November 29, 2020
    Than-Bauk Me Contest
   Sponsor: Charles Messina
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Allison Avatar
December 7, 2020 at 2:26 PM
you hit the bullseye GW, i see folk on here playing the fame game too:-( many congrats on your win - :-) hugs Jan xx
Wolf Avatar
December 8, 2020 at 12:25 PM
I like the phrase in your comment, 'the fame game.' Thanks, Jan. Season's Best, Gershon
Agustin Avatar
December 7, 2020 at 4:29 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Wolf Avatar
December 8, 2020 at 12:33 PM
Thank you for the enthusiasm, Beata! Blessings and Bounty, Gershon
Goldsmith Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 9:21 AM
Congratulations on your win. Few words with much said. Great write. Enjoy your win with blessings.....................
Wolf Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 4:22 PM
Paula, thank you for such a nice comment. Peace on Earth, Gershon
Kauffman Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 8:46 PM
You really it the "bullseye" with this one, Gershon - a real straight arrow flying right! Congratulations!
Wolf Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 4:20 PM
Your comment is a real bullseye too, as I am a real 'straight arrow!' lol. Thanks, Sam. Cheers, Gershon
Kendrick Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 3:54 AM
Congrats on your placement in the contest. Thanks for dropping by my page it congrats. Sara
Wolf Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 5:30 PM
Thanks for noticing my placement in the contest, Sara. Peace and Serenity, Gershon
Jayasankar Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 6:57 PM
Great thought Gershon. Congrats on your win. Have a great weekend.. ~ Ani
Wolf Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 5:28 PM
Thanks for noticing my placement in the contest, Ani. Light and Joy, Gershon
Seeker Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 6:08 PM
Great write! Congrats on your win, Gershon!
Wolf Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 5:25 PM
Appreciated, Seeker. Cheers, Gershon
Roper Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 2:50 PM
Congratulations on your winning placement. Hugs Eve
Wolf Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 5:25 PM
Thank you, Eve, and congratulations to you too for your win in Charlie's contest! Happiness and Hope, Gershon
Y. Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 2:13 PM
Hi Gershon, I’m just coming to say congratulations on a well deserved win. Have a wonderful day and weekend:-) Alexis
Wolf Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 5:21 PM
Thanks for noticing my win in the contest, Alexis. Happy weekend, Gershon
Evans Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 2:09 PM
Congrats! Did she play the game right in a right way, working her way up or in a bad way playing with fire? Just a thought (LOL).
Wolf Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 5:17 PM
Hadn't thought of that, Marilene. Perhaps she worked her way up on the couch. Many did, I guess. To me, it's quite sad -- the ultimate abuse of power. (Or maybe that should be reserved for slick Willy Clinton)... Thanks for the insight here. :) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 2:02 PM
Back with congrats!
Wolf Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 5:12 PM
Thank you for noticing, Kim. Happy Weekend, Gershon
Ranaweera  Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 2:02 PM
Congratulations, Gershon, on your placement for this witty, interesting piece!!
Wolf Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 5:11 PM
Thanks for noticing my placement, Newton. Here's to your placement again. Wine and Win, Gershon
Messina Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 11:57 AM
Great Than-Bauk, Gershon.. is Hollywood even open? (lol) Well done my friend. Congratulations on your placement. Stay well. Best regards.. Charlie
Wolf Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 1:42 PM
And thank you, Charlie, for sponsoring a great contest. Here's to the weekend! ~ Gershon
Thomas Avatar
December 1, 2020 at 1:17 PM
Hi Gershon :) it's been a while. This form is new to me; I must look it up! Wanted to say hello ;)
Wolf Avatar
December 1, 2020 at 3:21 PM
Thanks for surprising me with a nice visit. I like your new avatar too! Season's best, Gershon
Faulkner Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 7:11 PM
Looks like a winner to me, great flow and visually right on, sure hit the bullseye :)
Wolf Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 5:05 PM
I sure hope this one hits the target. I let it fly, anyway. Thanks for your support, Michelle. :) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 7:00 PM
Nice!
Wolf Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 5:05 PM
Thanks, Kim!
Y. Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 3:58 PM
Hi Gershon, This is a good entry for the contest. Hollywood here she comes! Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day my friend:-)Alexis
Wolf Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 4:51 PM
Thank you for your good wishes. I am not much good in contests, so I hope you're right about this one. Peace, Gershon
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