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Bullfrog Lullaby

Repose on lilies, A cessation of nature; Deep croaks grace the night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/9/2009 10:28:00 AM
Raul, again I say this is lovely. Haikus are some of my favorites and I think you do a wonderful job of creating them. With love, Alli
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Date: 6/8/2009 2:26:00 PM
This paints a very vivid picture. lying in bed at night I love listening to the tree frogs and other night noises. Unfortunately it is getting warmer and soon the windows will have to close and the air con go on. Love this. Regards Heidie
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Date: 6/8/2009 11:30:00 AM
Very nice Raul. Love this write. GBU Michael
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Date: 6/8/2009 5:46:00 AM
No frogs do I hear by me, but I can imagine. Peaceful haiku. Love, Shar
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Date: 6/8/2009 12:22:00 AM
Noises off as they say Raul.Nice one.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 6/7/2009 10:55:00 PM
Great Haiku Raul! Reminds me of home near the creak behind my house. Nate
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Date: 6/7/2009 5:37:00 PM
Raul I just loved this Haiku - I also live behind a canal and love the sounds of nature - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 6/7/2009 3:07:00 PM
A very nice writing you have hear Raul! I love the last line it is beautiful! O yea call me back sucker! lol
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Date: 6/7/2009 12:38:00 PM
Lovely Haiku Raul, nice write>James
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Date: 6/7/2009 12:18:00 PM
I am glad you painted such a nice picture because these critters make awful sounds at night.
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Date: 6/7/2009 10:32:00 AM
Love the title!! Interesting interaction between the last line and the title. Much said in just three lines. Thank you for sharing your haiku with us and for your kind words on my senryu. Karen
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