Bullets Rain Tears

Young and innocent they went to school
 Expecting to learn and play
 Never in anyones wildest of dreams
 Did we expect that day
 For a rain of tears to shell them
 From one lost deep to sin
 But heavenly hosts came down for them
 Releasing them from him
 The devil he did have his day
 But God in end dost win
 For noubt will be lost but these young lives
 Will not be gone in vain
 The laws of the land will change in ways
 For it must not happen again
 
Those who reign must stand on this
 Take stance and make a difference
 No one should be able to take a life
 With intent nor mindless innocence
 For even when with madmans mind
 You cannot be left to mingle
 How can you be able to walk in shop
 Purchase guns and not be liable
 Actions speak far louder than words
 And if we let just one slip through
 Without accounting for their sin
 It might well be me or you
 
For on anyone these bullets
 Might be named to fall upon
 So make a difference – make a change
 Add your name – petition
 The whole wide world mourns in shame
 An Amnesty is long past needed
 Write your letters – use your vote
 Act now while it is fresh
 And pray for the souls of all those lost
 That each by the Lord be blessed
 Also for those who’ve lived through this
 That they might find a way
 To find the strength and courage
 To step out further each day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 1/8/2013 2:35:00 PM
ANNA, stopping by to say hi and read your winning poem in the "" poetry soup VIGIL"'' contest by my sister Sidney... a nice and heartfelt poem to read. have yourself a good day. always & forever ~LINDA
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Anna-Marie Docherty
Date: 1/9/2013 4:00:00 AM
Thanks Linda, good to see you
Date: 1/7/2013 5:42:00 PM
i like the pro active approach you took with this one . Good job and congrats in this contest for the vigil on this tragedy.
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Anna-Marie Docherty
Date: 1/9/2013 3:59:00 AM
Thankyou Andrea, good to see you.
Date: 12/29/2012 7:27:00 PM
Anna, congrats with the warmness and compassion from your pen~SKAT
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Anna-Marie Docherty
Date: 1/4/2013 1:59:00 PM
Thanks for the added weight of support, all the very best fr 2013!
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