Bullets Path

by Michaelw1two

 Sunsets glow here in Al-Iraq,
 it casts an orange beige;
 fiery though its blister stare,
 the horizon is still a dusty greige;
 visual spectres shun its light,
 twilight’s shield released its guige;
 haunt these streets my squad and I,
 my sense perceives vestige.

 History’s constantly revisited,
 through the cobwebs of my mind;
 pathway trod by all humanity,
 birth and death of man entwined;
 humankind’s vistas temerariously adrift,
 fate is intertwined;
 plight creeps into my sensing thought,
 awakes subconscious winds.

 Night’s prayer sounds, the cry is heard,
 drifting from lone minaret;
 caution bleeds its honing sense,
 we each drop glowing cigarettes;
 masks filled of almond eyes peek,
 heads turn to our receiving set;
 desperation seeps, the mullah shrieks,
 Allah Akbar, prayers duet.

 Prayer beads, worn hands,
 hot streets are lined with pious souls;
 demands as such five times each day,
 man’s religion on patrol;
 unconscious, the kneeling mass,
 into the square a shadow strolls;
 thoughts delve into my mind,
 danger, alert, my breath extols.

 By din of voice the streets release,
 men humbly prayer call part;
 life here slowly turns, bodies duck,
 my heart fades then it starts;
 death wakens itself quick,
 specific no doubt just read Descartes’;
 exists last hint of bullets path,
 my face is gone my soul departs.

 Jan 2010

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Date: 9/28/2013 2:59:00 AM
Michael, a mesmerizing glimpse of war in the midst of seemingly fanatical religion. So very well written with haunting imagery.
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Date: 9/28/2013 4:24:00 AM
Aloha Karen... thank you for this read, and for your profound comments. There is something about bullet burned flesh that intensifies the memories, and what is imagery, but the wounds of our experiences. Religion is fanaticism, if taken out of the heart's context., and we mortals give ourselves this flaw... all of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michael.
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