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Bullets Flying

Bullets bullets flying, hitting there targets from afar Blood dripping from a bandage with looks of fear Tiny tiny pellets within, exploding going through helmets Snipers pinning down these hero's, to the ground Liftoff choppers with red cross, yellow smoke seen landing Fifty calibers with tracer bullets red then red, then red Claymore mines with a sign, point toward the enemy C-4 knocking at the door, used to start a camp fire C-rations with four cigarettes and a stick of gum inside P-38 opening cans of food, while the rain moves sideways Punji stick traps, holes under ground hiding VC Thought’s of home Christmas Day While battling for you

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Date: 9/12/2020 11:01:00 AM
Very descriptive write. I enjoyed it. I also agree with Gershon. Keep writing. Write everything you remember in incredible detail, like this!!
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Date: 9/9/2020 8:45:00 PM
With every passing year, it's more and more important that you write -- so clear -- about a war that was America's undoing in so many ways. Bravo, Bobby! You really pulled me in to the trenches. Thanks, Gershon
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Bobby May
Date: 9/10/2020 11:57:00 AM
Thank You G.W.
Date: 9/7/2020 2:07:00 PM
Great poetry, Bobby. Love this
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Bobby May
Date: 9/7/2020 2:27:00 PM
Thank You Andrea!!

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