Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Verse

Bullet Thoughts

hushed by angels singing do re mi
dark cloudy skies grin to twinkling stars
casting a spell of sweet romance...

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skies unending tears
seeps and seize humans and beasts
abstract earth portrait

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dozen thorns only a rose
who will care to bear the bloom?
bracing it's petal scented swells..

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liquid drops drumbeats
it's fall drench the trees and soil
newly bath earth..

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small fingers curl---
.............................tear falls from mama's cheek

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amidst falling rain---
............................warm bodies dance
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scarlet blossom stretch---
.......................................scream of innocence
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©O. E. Guillermo
12:36pm-- December 06, 2014

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Paul Callus December 11, 2014 at 12:20 PM There is a lot of sense and beauty in these staccato lines; short writes can express a lot. well done Olive_eloi!:) // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 11, 2014 at 9:18 PM hahhaah maybe I am following someone's step.. :D and trying some lines that displays less but speaks more.. :)! who could that be.. ?? :D! thanks much. :) indeed the broken monoku is my fave among these.. :)! thanks Paul.. :D Paul Callus December 11, 2014 at 12:21 PM ...like your broken monokus best.

Scott Thirtyseven December 11, 2014 at 6:14 AM Fav. bullet No. 4. A stand alone piece. Most impressed. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 11, 2014 at 9:16 PM thanks much Scott.. :)! appreciate your drop.. :)!

Arthur Vaso December 10, 2014 at 10:38 PM I was a wee bit scared you wanted to kill me with poetic bullets, but after reading this, I am alive with a smile, at this beautiful prose! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 10, 2014 at 10:59 PM keep that smile BUddy Art.. :)! hugs.. :) thanks for the drop by.. :)! Thank you for your thoughtfulness.. :)!

James Fraser December 9, 2014 at 12:52 PM Sometimes thoughts fired at the paper, turn out to be gems. I love these bullets you've written, James :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 10, 2014 at 3:37 AM thanks much James.. :) I soemtimes scribble in facebook but i sometimes forget to continue it.. :)! lil that I know that they are tutning fine anyhow.. :)!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty December 9, 2014 at 7:46 AM small fingers curl--- .............................tear falls from mama's cheek. Oh!>>>love Olive...rajat Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 10, 2014 at 3:35 AM thanks much Rajat. :) I appreciate it.. :l this im inspired of my sisters baby.. :)

David Williams December 8, 2014 at 11:25 PM Olive I like the rapid fire they come off the page at the reader, but if I may say I think it would read better if the 2nd and 3rd were reversed, very good piece...David Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 10, 2014 at 3:34 AM thanks David i take your advice.. :) i realize indeed its better.. :)

David Meade December 8, 2014 at 10:46 PM Rain from the sky or tears from eye -- can be good and cleansing -- or too much can flood and deepen into pools of depression. Your bullets strike with deadly accuracy. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 10, 2014 at 3:33 AM thanks much David.. :) Just yesterday it is raining amd raining and raining.. :) and so these just came through. .