Anonomus Scorpio Poet Concrete

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Bullet Proof

So, do you tell all your friends that you have loves gun to my head?
 My legs work just fine it's easy to get up and walk away from this bed
   Love is not       a chain welded for your misuse
 My heart's             not 
an anvil for your hammer
to forge my abuse
For all the depth 
and warmth to you 
that my eyes did show
You are about to find 
out how deeply low my 
heart's A/C can go

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Diane Perna May 22, 2023 at 2:55 PM Love your message, I can totally relate, excellent writing! Anonomus Scorpio May 24, 2023 at 1:01 PM Thank you Diane I'm glad you enjoyed it! Greatly appreciate your compliments. Warmly A.S.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart March 2, 2023 at 6:24 AM Ooh SNAP! Love it. Fave’n, feverishly. xomo Anonomus Scorpio March 2, 2023 at 6:59 AM <3 ;) I thought you might like this one!! Thanks Mo!! A.S.

Anna Hopper March 1, 2023 at 3:03 PM This is excellent!!! Very well worded. I felt it. Also thank you for all of your kind words. I assume you are a Scorpio? Anonomus Scorpio March 1, 2023 at 3:13 PM Thank you so much for taking the time to stop by Anna! I seriously enjoy your work as well! And yes I am most definitely a Scorpio keep going down my list of poems and I guarantee you'll run into that one ;) with overwhelming respect and reverence A.S.

Paige Hind March 1, 2023 at 9:46 AM You are about to find out how deeply low my heart's A/C can go--this is an amazing metaphor, A.S.!! Wonderful poem!! Anonomus Scorpio March 1, 2023 at 10:36 AM Thank you very much Paige! I was hoping you'd notice the shape of the words ;) Cordially A.S.

Charlotte Puddifoot March 1, 2023 at 8:07 AM i find this a very intriguing short free verse - i like the way that questioning opening line pulls the reader right into the poem.:) Anonomus Scorpio March 1, 2023 at 8:21 AM I am very flattered by the praise! It was my whole intention that this piece cause discomfort. While still giving a sense of empowerment to those who are in difficult situations. Warmly A.S.