Bukowski Contest

Bukowski Contest

Its a video -- Bukowski has a
mistress, she is younger than

he and beautiful.

They fight before the camera
and, she flees like words on 
pale paper across the transom,
out the door...

He sits for a while unaware of
the camera, the poems quiet for
a while, his brow naked except 
for regret and sorrow.

Then, he calls out to her in dipthongs
of need, his boastful alcohol wearing
off -- the frail, lonely intellectual
peering moist eyed around fleshen 
corners.

Genius
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A  Avatar
April 11, 2014 at 10:45 PM
ROMELLA, Congratulations, on your win:) Enjoyed stopping by. LUV ~SKAT~
A   Avatar
April 11, 2014 at 9:45 PM
Romella, Congratulations, In Amy's Idiot or Genius, contest.... Enjoyed the win.... ~ Linda
Mehta Avatar
April 11, 2014 at 6:35 AM
Congratulations on a fine win in the Bukowski Contest, romella
Kitchens Avatar
April 11, 2014 at 7:33 AM
Dr. Mehta, your poem is elegant and wise. I was surprised to have placed. Bukowski was an enigma as a human being but also as a poetry character. Your poem juxtaposes what a poet should be against what the Bukowski persona appeared to be. Very inspiring. Congratulations. I am so happy. I will enter again sometime. I am looking for a happy contest this time. This is so much fun
Lamoureux Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 7:59 PM
This captured my emotions, brilliant portrayal. Congratulations.
Kitchens Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 10:28 PM
Thanks, Richard. I like the contests very much.
Green Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 7:05 PM
Beautiful capture of "being in the moment", excellent piece. Thank you for your submission.
Kitchens Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 7:39 PM
Amy, I enjoyed your contest, very much. The thematic made me think in a specific manner. Romella
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