William Kelii Kekaula Poet Verse

Notes About The Poem

Poetic Form: Verse/Waltmarie
Inspired: 2024 January 31

 

Verse/Waltmarie Poetic Form:
10 lines
Odd lines: Longer, non-syllabic, unrhymed
Even lines: Shorter, two-syllables (Expound/expose the odd line)
*Even lines create a mini-version

Image: N/A

Building Sand Castles: A Waltmarie Poetic Form

The Pacific inky bluish ocean ashore splashed 
quite clear
traipsing through surging surf across the sandy beach
soleless
a hot noonday sun pours o'er an early-made sand castle
crumbling
two conch shells lying about is now being held to ears
New Wave
a large beach towel wraps two necking near a car lot
planning

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Vijay Pandit February 1, 2024 at 5:36 AM Your poem brings to fore progressively beautiful images--and takes the reader to the scene:--The Pacific inky bluish ocean ashore splashed--a hot noonday sun pours o'er an early-made sand castle--splendid! William Kelii Kekaula February 1, 2024 at 6:05 AM Your spotlights, Vijay, accentuates your thought filled good natured qualities, my friend, Aloha, William

Karen Jones February 1, 2024 at 2:21 AM Ah this is like a red reverie of sandy beach thoughts. I enjoyed reading and could really hear the waves in the shell. Good job William Kelii Kekaula February 1, 2024 at 5:58 AM A wealth of shared goodness, Karen, always welcoming, Aloha, William