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(Entry for the Nursery Rhymes 7 Poetry Contest, submitted September 3, 2024 - Second Place)

One, two, what'll I do? Three, four, up from the floor. Five, six, stack them like bricks. Seven, eight, make sure they're straight! Nine, ten, will I go again? Eleven...oh my heavens!

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Date: 9/29/2024 7:02:00 AM
Your poem is very charming, Jim! I like the way you rhymed it. Congrats! Sandra
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Date: 9/29/2024 1:28:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra. I appreciate it. Cheers from Canada. J.

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