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My humbled tribute to King Ludwig ll of Bavaria, Germany. To me he was just awesome

"Key to my heart" is a poetry style created by Dorian Petersen Potter.

 

 

Builder of Dreams -Key To My Heart

(Key To My Heart) 


The 
Sun glows 
On your 
Radiant 
Nice face 
Deep eyes********So blue 
Beautiful face mind and body too 
Fairy tale Prince you stand so tall 
Wonderful King in all 
Fantastic dream builder 
Oh beautiful King 
Unforgettable 
True Prince 
You shine 
You were 
Always 
A dreamer 
Music art 
Lover 
You built 
Unique 
Dreams 



Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladydp2000@2011 
copyright@2014

October,8,2014 

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Sandra Haight Date: 10/8/2014 4:29:00 PM Dorian, what a beautifully written tribute, and such an awesome "key to my heart" shape you created! I'm sure it difficult to select imaginative and meaningful words to use in these restrictive spaces. Definitely a 7 for me. Sandra Login to Reply

Gary Bateman Date: 10/8/2014 1:48:00 PM Dorian, I can tell your liked King Ludwig II of Bavaria. I live here in Germany, albeit in Niedersachsen (Lowery Saxony) near Hannover in north central Germany. But I am very familiar with the various principality monarchs like King Ludwig II from the earlier years in Bavaria and Baden Württemberg. Your tribute quite nice and I like the shape poem them, that is, in the form of a key. Most Superb and a Most Superb "7" from me!! Cheers, Gary Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 10/8/2014 10:51:00 AM A lovely tribute Dorian....best wishes Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 10/8/2014 3:31:00 AM what a beautiful tribute and an incredible shape poem Dorian - i am in awe:-) hugs jan xxx Login to Reply