Builder of Dreams -Key To My Heart

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My humbled tribute to King Ludwig ll of Bavaria, Germany. To me he was just awesome

"Key to my heart" is a poetry style created by Dorian Petersen Potter.

(Key To My Heart) The Sun glows On your Radiant Nice face Deep eyes********So blue Beautiful face mind and body too Fairy tale Prince you stand so tall Wonderful King in all Fantastic dream builder Oh beautiful King Unforgettable True Prince You shine You were Always A dreamer Music art Lover You built Unique Dreams Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000@2011 copyright@2014 October,8,2014

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Sandra Haight

Date: 10/8/2014 4:29:00 PM

Dorian, what a beautifully written tribute, and such an awesome "key to my heart" shape you created! I'm sure it difficult to select imaginative and meaningful words to use in these restrictive spaces. Definitely a 7 for me. Sandra

Gary Bateman

Date: 10/8/2014 1:48:00 PM

Dorian, I can tell your liked King Ludwig II of Bavaria. I live here in Germany, albeit in Niedersachsen (Lowery Saxony) near Hannover in north central Germany. But I am very familiar with the various principality monarchs like King Ludwig II from the earlier years in Bavaria and Baden Württemberg. Your tribute quite nice and I like the shape poem them, that is, in the form of a key. Most Superb and a Most Superb "7" from me!! Cheers, Gary

Joseph May

Date: 10/8/2014 10:51:00 AM

A lovely tribute Dorian....best wishes

Jan Allison

Date: 10/8/2014 3:31:00 AM

what a beautiful tribute and an incredible shape poem Dorian - i am in awe:-) hugs jan xxx