Bugs In My Meatloaf

My dear Aunt Mildred was quite a kidder Put bugs in my meat loaf, could've hit her Got her back though Put mustard in her hose Walked around attracting little critters
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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November 3, 2017 at 9:40 AM
What a sight to behold//Milly strutting in gold//Someone tell 'er//Yer sox are yeller//What a story you've told! CONDIMENT ON SIR JACK SILLY!!!
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November 3, 2017 at 10:09 AM
She was a real yummy condiment so the least I could was pat her sweet attriBUTT!!!
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November 3, 2017 at 6:56 AM
Ha! You have created a hilarious and funny write here my friend! You do portray such humor inside even the littlest of things...those bugs and critters all love to eat meatloaf and mustard don't they?! You crack me up! What a grand piece, Great Work!!
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November 3, 2017 at 7:11 AM
Happy to be of service Mr. Russell! Hope you day will be a winner! CHEERS!
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