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Buffet of Flowers

young hummingbird bush has yet to bloom – still they fly… taste of spring in the air sweet nectar is sipped from the daffodil trumpets… wings fluttering fast irises in sight colorful birds visit them… bellies still not full azaleas call out the hummingbirds last retreat… satisfied, they nest *Entry for Sidney Lee Ann’s “ Sweet Flowers and Hummingbirds" contest by Carolyn Devonshire

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Date: 5/1/2012 8:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Sweet Flowers & Hummingbirds" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/25/2012 7:31:00 PM
Hi dear.. congrats once again..hope all is well..mail soon. BG
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Date: 4/25/2012 12:47:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this creative work...Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 4/25/2012 1:30:00 AM
The hummingbird's smorgasbord...I knew this one was great...The haiku series is so well tho't out as the plot grows and grows...Congrats, Carolyn...Oh, BTW,,,did u ever switch out that defective washing machine...makes my b@@ bs hurt! ha ha...Gwendolen
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Date: 4/24/2012 10:03:00 PM
Congratulations Carolyn on your win.Beautiful series of haiku.
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Date: 4/18/2012 12:51:00 PM
Oh well done Carolyn.." i could feel i was among the scenery you've described; wish you the very best in the contest..)
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Date: 4/16/2012 11:59:00 AM
Beautiful Buffet of Flowers Carolyn. We have abundances of wild Azaleas here in the Ozark Mts. They are one of my favorite flowers. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/16/2012 9:15:00 AM
sweet! jimbo
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Date: 4/15/2012 8:31:00 PM
Wonderful imagery here Carolyn.Love it.Best wishes.
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Date: 4/15/2012 7:59:00 PM
A radiant write...a haiku story so sweet. :) Gwendolen
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Date: 4/15/2012 5:18:00 AM
Beautiful set of Haiku's dear poet ! Noah and I just moved in our new house, and everyone has the blistering of radiance such as you describe in your fantastic write Carolyn; now we must work on ours ! We are finally settled in so you should be seeing more of me....have a wonderful weekend dear friend ! Much love, james
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Date: 4/15/2012 5:01:00 AM
Hi Carolyn, Well how are you my friend? Hopefully you understand that with God all is possible, I'm working on the third book in the series of ten and would like permission to insert one your poems for my contituants to see. God works in mysterious way, and your time is not so short that I truly believe, you are a god person and you are my friend I will say prayers for yur safety and health thank you for your comments and you have been with me from the start of theis mission God bless
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Date: 4/14/2012 11:01:00 PM
This is a beautiful series of haiku's my friend.. I like it!!..:JP]
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Date: 4/14/2012 8:39:00 PM
You combined those flowers and hummingbirds very prettily!
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Date: 4/14/2012 7:20:00 PM
This is quite the glorious write my dear friend! I love the use of the hummingbird and the flower within your poem! My favorite stanza has to be the 3rd stanza in all its glory...honestly, Irises are one of my favorite flowers, that and the rose! I really love your poem that I have read this evening! Great Work!!
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