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Played around with lines from an older poem to create a haiku. 

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the budding pear wearing white clusters of pearls . . . spring's fashionista

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Date: 5/27/2025 2:40:00 PM
Gorgeous!! <3
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Date: 5/25/2025 8:47:00 AM
Congratulations dear poetess on your win in this contest with a thoughtful write aligning nature to fashion. Wish you a pleasant coming week.
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Date: 5/25/2025 4:30:00 AM
Adorably adorned, Andrea, so cute ... CayCay
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Date: 5/24/2025 5:24:00 PM
LOVE IT. Andrea! "Budding fashionista! Great image bathed in creativity! Our pear tree is in bloom and you have captured its joy perfectly! Thank you for this joy! Blessings!
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Date: 5/24/2025 3:43:00 PM
Describing the budding pear as a fashionsta is exactly right, the tree is beautiful.
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Date: 5/24/2025 2:21:00 PM
very cool, andrea! i like this very much...
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Date: 5/24/2025 12:38:00 PM
Excellent Haiku. The imagery is excellent
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Date: 5/24/2025 7:10:00 AM
Very picturesque! Imagery is everything in these short works, and I believe you have the art mastered. Well done!
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Date: 5/24/2025 1:51:00 AM
You astound me with your short but meaningful haikus.
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Date: 5/24/2025 1:08:00 AM
just beautiful and subtle, merci beaucoup
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Date: 5/23/2025 11:58:00 PM
Great write on the petals so white.' I have just posted one..I think you wil be?? Intersted anyway i hope all is as good as it can be? Anyway enough from me.'
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