Notes About The Poem

Played around with lines from an older poem to create a haiku. 

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budding pear hiku

the budding pear
                wearing white clusters of pearls . . .
                         spring's fashionista
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Legros Kelley Avatar
May 28, 2025 at 6:02 PM
Oh this is so pretty!
Hind Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 2:40 PM
Gorgeous!! <3
Guptar Avatar
May 25, 2025 at 8:47 AM
Congratulations dear poetess on your win in this contest with a thoughtful write aligning nature to fashion. Wish you a pleasant coming week.
Godwin Avatar
May 25, 2025 at 4:30 AM
Adorably adorned, Andrea, so cute ... CayCay
Kauffman Avatar
May 24, 2025 at 5:24 PM
LOVE IT. Andrea! "Budding fashionista! Great image bathed in creativity! Our pear tree is in bloom and you have captured its joy perfectly! Thank you for this joy! Blessings!
Hawley Avatar
May 24, 2025 at 3:43 PM
Describing the budding pear as a fashionsta is exactly right, the tree is beautiful.
Bauer Avatar
May 24, 2025 at 2:21 PM
very cool, andrea! i like this very much...
Mckeithan Avatar
May 24, 2025 at 12:38 PM
Excellent Haiku. The imagery is excellent
DiMino Avatar
May 24, 2025 at 7:10 AM
Very picturesque! Imagery is everything in these short works, and I believe you have the art mastered. Well done!
Buhagiar Avatar
May 24, 2025 at 1:51 AM
You astound me with your short but meaningful haikus.
Rolland Avatar
May 24, 2025 at 1:08 AM
just beautiful and subtle, merci beaucoup
Maverick Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 11:58 PM
Great write on the petals so white.' I have just posted one..I think you wil be?? Intersted anyway i hope all is as good as it can be? Anyway enough from me.'
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