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Budding Beauty Burning

Blue bonnie budding beauty burn
Ready to receive fluttering butterflies
Breathing heavy heart not seen
Glittering dew drops signify all.

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July 27, 2014
Form:Jue Ju
Dr. Ram Mehta
Eighth Place Win
Contest: The Passion in A Jue Ju by nette onclaud

Copyright © Dr.Ram Mehta | Year Posted 2014

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Fabiyas M V Date: 8/7/2014 10:46:00 AM Beautifully penned piece,Dr.Ram.Congratulations! Login to Reply

Casarah Nance Date: 8/5/2014 6:06:00 PM Your alliterations are spot on, and your performance is great, well done making it onto Nette's winners list! Many happy smiles :) Login to Reply

Robert Lindley Date: 8/4/2014 9:02:00 PM I like this one. Big congrats on your win!! Login to Reply

David Mohn Date: 8/4/2014 7:13:00 PM Congrats to you Dr. Ram...nicely written Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/4/2014 4:45:00 PM good to see this on the list,Dr. Ram. BIG congrats for your win. Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 8/4/2014 11:28:00 AM Attracted by the "Breathing heavy heart" and alliteration. Congratulations on your win DR. // paul Login to Reply

Mohan Chutani Date: 8/4/2014 10:08:00 AM Dr. Ram, congrats for a very fine Jue ju. Mohan Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 8/4/2014 7:42:00 AM Very wonderful Dr Ram! Congrats on big win! Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 8/4/2014 4:42:00 AM wow wonderful alliteration Dr Mehta:-) just dropping by with my congratulations. Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Anna-Marie Docherty Date: 7/28/2014 8:31:00 AM Wow, Dr Mehta - this poem comes alive with the senses. Few words but wild as! Well done... Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/27/2014 5:13:00 PM NIce one for alliteration, Dr. Ram. It's a pretty poem. Login to Reply

Tim Smith Date: 7/27/2014 2:43:00 PM I love the alliteration....Tim Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 7/27/2014 9:01:00 AM Perfect Jue Ju Dr Ram! Gl in contest! Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 7/27/2014 6:10:00 AM Beautifully written with great alliteration, Dr. Ram. Wishing you success in the contest! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply