Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Verse

Budding Beauty Burning

Blue bonnie budding beauty burn
Ready to receive fluttering butterflies
Breathing heavy heart not seen
Glittering dew drops signify all.

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July 27, 2014
Form:Jue Ju
Dr. Ram Mehta
Eighth Place Win
Contest: The Passion in A Jue Ju by nette onclaud

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Fabiyas M V August 7, 2014 at 10:46 AM Beautifully penned piece,Dr.Ram.Congratulations!

Casarah Nance August 5, 2014 at 6:06 PM Your alliterations are spot on, and your performance is great, well done making it onto Nette's winners list! Many happy smiles :)

Robert Lindley August 4, 2014 at 9:02 PM I like this one. Big congrats on your win!!

David Mohn August 4, 2014 at 7:13 PM Congrats to you Dr. Ram...nicely written

Andrea Dietrich August 4, 2014 at 4:45 PM good to see this on the list,Dr. Ram. BIG congrats for your win.

Paul Callus August 4, 2014 at 11:28 AM Attracted by the "Breathing heavy heart" and alliteration. Congratulations on your win DR. // paul

Mohan Chutani August 4, 2014 at 10:08 AM Dr. Ram, congrats for a very fine Jue ju. Mohan

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 4, 2014 at 7:42 AM Very wonderful Dr Ram! Congrats on big win!

Jan Allison August 4, 2014 at 4:42 AM wow wonderful alliteration Dr Mehta:-) just dropping by with my congratulations. Hugs Jan xx

Anna-Marie Docherty July 28, 2014 at 8:31 AM Wow, Dr Mehta - this poem comes alive with the senses. Few words but wild as! Well done...

Andrea Dietrich July 27, 2014 at 5:13 PM NIce one for alliteration, Dr. Ram. It's a pretty poem.

Tim Smith July 27, 2014 at 2:43 PM I love the alliteration....Tim

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 27, 2014 at 9:01 AM Perfect Jue Ju Dr Ram! Gl in contest!

Carolyn Devonshire July 27, 2014 at 6:10 AM Beautifully written with great alliteration, Dr. Ram. Wishing you success in the contest! Love, Carolyn