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---Buddhist Prayers Fly

Buddhist prayers fly
like cardinals and finches
above a white rail 
square boxes hold orange mums
flagging down the yellow sun

the morning begins 
seated on the back porch with tea
the cat's in my lap 
the chair next to me empty
as are the springs flower beds 

missing only you
a long lost part ever missed
an empty cushion
a single china teacup
one lonely pair of old shoes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
September 21, 2011 at 2:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest of Francine "The View" Debbie. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
September 19, 2011 at 11:25 AM
can I come over for a cup of tea?? I'll gladly fill that empty chair, I'll wear my old shoes, and feel right at home!! :)
Sweetheart Avatar
September 18, 2011 at 11:03 PM
CONGRATS DEBBIE ON ANOTHER AMAZING WIN WITH INTERESTING INTRIGUING LINES OF TANKA SO PERFECTLY PENNED LUV...
Roberts Avatar
September 18, 2011 at 10:57 PM
so colourful, so expressive, congrats Debbie on your 8th place win in the contest
Ramsdale Avatar
September 8, 2011 at 6:57 PM
Remarkable write...CR
Roberts Avatar
September 8, 2011 at 5:39 PM
soup mail
Kendrick Avatar
September 8, 2011 at 4:41 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Sara
Brown Avatar
September 8, 2011 at 2:59 PM
~~~Amazing~~~Debbie. Top spot material. Love, Carol
Pickett Avatar
September 8, 2011 at 8:47 AM
Nice write here Debbie, Very visual indeed...God Bless....Taz
Dietrich Avatar
September 8, 2011 at 1:14 AM
wow, this is the way to do tanka. I 'm afraid the way I did MY view was very ordinary by comparison This is worthy of a very high win!
Ross Jr. Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 9:50 PM
Wonderful write lovely Lady Debbie......with love...old Jack.......good luck on contest
Sivey Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 9:35 PM
What a sad poem, Debbie! I thought it a wonderful write though!! You'll do well in the contest!!
Sadberry Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 9:32 PM
Smile, *^_^* “I Am Unable to Log Into The About This Poems Section Yet From This Seemingly Yearnfuls Verse My Dear Precious & Priceless, Blessed & Beautiful Debbie! *^_^* I Love the Soulfulness I Find Brushed Into The Colours Within Its Words *^_^* And As For Your Beauties Coms Question *^_^* Yesss, I Find Beauty Everywhere Yet, Sometimes I Seem Driven Unto The Other Side of This Moment Times Spectrum In Regards Unto Precious Lives & Life, My Dear *^_^* Love, Is The Only Thing That Truly Matters & Sometimes, Its Beauty Speaks In Many Different Voices *^_^* Very Beautiful Painting!” === My Love Unto Your Gifted Splendours, Always & Forever, Jasper *
Jones Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 9:10 PM
I can see it, Debbie... and I've not even clicked on the "about this poem" thingy. Well done! ~N
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