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Bucket List In Bed With Thunderstorms

A bucket list –In Bed with Summer Thunderstorms A bucket under the leak in the roof has a solid hole Next to the pail a trail of water and the bucket trembles In the storm from the steady stream and into the night Two holes one shelter one bucket one trailblazing journey Is the bucket half full or is it half empty should I fix it? Who is the roof and where goes the flow am I the bucket To write poems under the leak please give me a waterproof pen No paper needed I will write on the sheets and the wood of the rafter

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Date: 11/29/2017 10:48:00 AM
Oh I thought I was going to see a bucket list of future adventures :) a cool write Kai, and hope the leak was fixed :) hugs and smiles :)
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 12/1/2017 8:26:00 AM
Thank you Akkina. The leak is so very much fixed. My poems tend to leak out of the expected sometimes. Many wishes, Kai
Date: 11/21/2017 6:48:00 PM
Hi Kai.... When I saw the title, "the bucket list" I thought that you are too young to write a bucket list, but I was surprised when I read this nice poem.... regards.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 11/22/2017 6:42:00 AM
Thank you for that. Many wishes, Kai
Date: 11/19/2017 8:11:00 AM
Hmmm...deep poem, Kai, I hope everything is fine with you:)
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 11/19/2017 9:55:00 AM
Hi Jo. Absolutely fine. I admit that the end of the poem might seem very dark. But the light is shining here inside and outside. Many wishes and thank you for asking. Kai

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