Bubbling

"Good" poetry is like alchemy:
You dig as deep as you can,
Rising above the weariness.
You don't even need to see 
Times troubled miracles
To notice everything 
Bubbling over.

And look how everything's just bubbling over,
                                                                 Bubbling,
                                                                      Bubbling,
                                                                                           Over.
                                                                            Bubbling,
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Arno Avatar
December 15, 2011 at 3:59 PM
Congratulations on your winning entry Jon
Onclaud Avatar
December 15, 2011 at 10:14 AM
you wow me, matt.. i like the form and content.. happy congrats! :) huggs!
Quigley Avatar
December 15, 2011 at 8:48 AM
A very clever write Matt. Congratulations
Brown Avatar
December 15, 2011 at 5:26 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Two To Twelve" contest Matt. Love, Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 15, 2011 at 3:57 AM
Congratulations and happy forthcoming holidays x
Andresen Avatar
December 13, 2011 at 3:03 PM
Just: BUBBLING AND BUBBLING, Matt Funny.Love from Norway and Anne-Lise
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