Bubbles

Spheres of luminous beauty Enclosing air in a super thin cage Surface of colorful swirls Effortlessly floating Enjoyed by people of all ages Suddenly vanishing

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/20/2024 3:05:00 AM

Hi Warren Bubbles, oh wow yes they entrance me I can imagine in my minds eye that they look like fairies floating, wish fairies were true and not just a myth! Great write Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Charles Messina

Date: 12/1/2023 1:34:00 AM

Yep, I've yet to find anyone who doesn't like bubbles (lol). Nice write, Warren. Charlie

Warren Doll
Date: 12/10/2023 5:46:00 AM

Charles, thanks for your visit and positive comments~ Warren

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/25/2023 4:45:00 PM

Your pieces are always fun. Apparently hope does float.

Warren Doll
Date: 11/29/2023 6:04:00 AM

Richard, thanks for your positive comments~ Warren

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/25/2023 8:26:00 AM

Congratulations dear friend on your inclusion of your awesome poetry in Poetry Soups third Anthology - Reflections on the Important Things. Blessings, Jennifer.

Warren Doll
Date: 11/29/2023 6:00:00 AM

Jennifer, thanks so much. I think your poetry in the new anthology is fantastic. All the best~ Warren

Mike Gentile

Date: 11/8/2023 4:01:00 AM

Warren, I love your tribute to this fickle thing of beauty! So lovely to read this morning! Happy Wednesday!!

Warren Doll
Date: 11/8/2023 3:21:00 PM

Mike, thanks so much for your positive comments and visit. A Happy Wednesday to you too.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/3/2023 7:57:00 AM

This a lovely description of bubbles, Warren. It brings to fore the colorful sphere floating on air. Splendid write!

Warren Doll
Date: 11/6/2023 6:30:00 AM

Vijay, Thanks so much . I'm glad that you liked it~ Warren.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/31/2023 7:02:00 PM

what wonderful imagery Warren and oh i have to admit I still love a tube of bubbles brings out the child in me lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Warren Doll
Date: 11/6/2023 6:26:00 AM

Jan, thanks for your visit and positive comments, I like them too. Hugs~ Warren