Newton Ranaweera Poet Free verse

Bubbles

She started at dawn
when dew was glistening,
and bubbles were dancing
to the tune of kerosene lamps.


Oct. 25, 2020
Liberum Divisa 2 Poetry Contest
Gregory R Barden 


Original poem: “Mother Love” (Posted on January 16, 2017 and submitted on April 9, 2017 to “Non Romantic Love” Premiere Poetry Contest, conducted by Emile Pinet.)

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Jan Allison October 28, 2020 at 12:41 PM absolutely charming such a touching piece and lovely imagery and image, your son is a very talented artist as you are a gifted poet ... creativity must be in your blood:-) hugs jan xx Newton Ranaweera October 28, 2020 at 6:44 PM Thank you so much, Jan, for this impressively lovely comment and the great compliment!!

Andrea Dietrich October 28, 2020 at 7:13 AM yes, mother's love is up at all hours of rhe morning and night. did you do the picture as well? It's so interesting how there are tears in her eyes. Newton Ranaweera October 28, 2020 at 12:31 PM Thank you so much, Andrea, for this great comment!! My son did the image for me.

Mystic Rose Rose October 26, 2020 at 6:34 PM What a beautiful poignant scene dear Newton, winning wishes are being sent your way dear poet. Newton Ranaweera October 26, 2020 at 7:18 PM Thank you so much, Pixie, for this lovely comment!!

Anne-Lise Andresen October 26, 2020 at 6:14 AM - I like the title: "Mother Love" better than "Bubbles" ... but, a great verse ... good luck in the contest, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Newton Ranaweera October 26, 2020 at 5:02 PM Sure, even I like the title, "Mother Love". Thank you so much, Anne-Lise!!