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Bubbles

She started at dawn when dew was glistening, and bubbles were dancing to the tune of kerosene lamps. Oct. 25, 2020 Liberum Divisa 2 Poetry Contest Gregory R Barden Original poem: “Mother Love” (Posted on January 16, 2017 and submitted on April 9, 2017 to “Non Romantic Love” Premiere Poetry Contest, conducted by Emile Pinet.)

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Jan Allison

Date: 10/28/2020 12:41:00 PM

absolutely charming such a touching piece and lovely imagery and image, your son is a very talented artist as you are a gifted poet ... creativity must be in your blood:-) hugs jan xx

Newton Ranaweera
Date: 10/28/2020 6:44:00 PM

Thank you so much, Jan, for this impressively lovely comment and the great compliment!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/28/2020 7:13:00 AM

yes, mother's love is up at all hours of rhe morning and night. did you do the picture as well? It's so interesting how there are tears in her eyes.

Newton Ranaweera
Date: 10/28/2020 12:31:00 PM

Thank you so much, Andrea, for this great comment!! My son did the image for me.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/26/2020 6:34:00 PM

What a beautiful poignant scene dear Newton, winning wishes are being sent your way dear poet.

Newton Ranaweera
Date: 10/26/2020 7:18:00 PM

Thank you so much, Pixie, for this lovely comment!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/26/2020 6:14:00 AM

- I like the title: "Mother Love" better than "Bubbles" ... but, a great verse ... good luck in the contest, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Newton Ranaweera
Date: 10/26/2020 5:02:00 PM

Sure, even I like the title, "Mother Love". Thank you so much, Anne-Lise!!