Brutal Bruce

Bruce was a hard taskmaster
Who ordered his staff to work faster
The faster they went
Bruce would not relent
Causing a major disaster
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Krutsinger Avatar
July 3, 2020 at 11:45 PM
Taskmaster is such a great word. I am going to borrow this one if you do not mind. Your rhymes are fine!
Laurie Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 7:03 PM
Hello Shirley … like nobody bothering to turn up for work Shirley - thanks Shirley - Lindsay
Hawkins Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 8:16 PM
That would teach him a lesson... Thank you, Lindsay. I hope you have a nice day...Shirley
Leffanta Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 1:43 PM
The Great Wall of China in limerick form! Aloha! Rico
Hawkins Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 8:24 PM
G'Day Rico, Slave Labour...
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