Brushstrokes Of Sunset

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Brian Strand's Posted March Poem

sunset sails on palettes of tangerine I close my eyes to fondle this spectacle in few nicks of brushstrokes; its glory done my tears stumble , free falling... asking for whys of its hues vanishing

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/25/2025 7:44:00 AM

Nette, I can relate as I always loved the taste of tangerine. Some things in nature are beautiful and we hate to see them disappear. Smiles!!!

Paige Hind

Date: 3/14/2025 5:47:00 PM

Haunting picture, my friend. Very beautiful.

Tom Woody

Date: 3/9/2025 6:25:00 AM

Your poem hints at a deeper meaning, the loss of someone or something dear. My wife and I caught a sunset here in Florida recently. Got a great silhouette photo of her aside the sun. A classic treasure