Brush, Pen and Staff

At fourteen I created
a miniature painting:
a portrait of an actress I highly admired;
nothing exceptional or thrilling.

At fifteen I wrote my first verse,
whoever read it: thought it was far from terse
with thoughts that didn't connect,
or revealed intellect.

At forty I started writing
notes on the staff with perfect pitch while feeling
the spirit of Mozart
teaching me the tricks of his art. 


Written on 11/20/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Cadet Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 9:41 AM
Fantastic poem. I love the title and the precise words to describe the evolution of your passion in verse. Congratulations in the contest. -- Wesley
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December 3, 2016 at 12:21 PM
Greetings, Wesley. Thank you for your kind comment. It is a pleasure to hear from you. Poetry fills my life with joy, and I like to share it with people who have the same passion. I wish you success in your writing endeavors. Enjoy your day. Warm Wishes for the Holiday Season. Peace & Love, Andrew.
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November 22, 2016 at 11:25 AM
beautiful word-paintings that develop through time, daver.. huggs
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November 23, 2016 at 9:33 AM
Thank you Nette for your kind comment. I am happy to hear from you. Latel, I haven't posted much on PoetrySoup, I just visit it once in a while. Keep on writing beautiful poetry. Have a Happy Thanksgiving Day with your loved ones. Hugs, Andrew.
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