Bruised Maina Bird

You were a free bird, 
Singing melodious tunes on tree branches,
Merrily jumping from tree to tree at your wish,
Till you got trapped in a cage for human pleasure.

The owner taught you her heartfelt song,
"whisper in my ears when my beloved will be home",
You sang the song when she came near you,
She got happy and fed you a few pieces of grain.

Feathers once soft with the dew of dawn
Now bear the weight of echoes and bars;
Your eyes, glass pools of longing, draw
The thin lines where freedom slips and scars.

You sang of mango blossoms, of rain’s first breath,
Of distant hills that held your wings at play;
Yet here you sit under shadowed roof—
Your melody stifled by steel, day after day.

Still your voice trembles on the strains of hope:
A flute against thunder; a whisper in storm;
Though battered, your heart recalls the sky,
Its boundless blue, its infinite form.

Oh Maina, though bruised, you are not broken;
Your song bends, but never yields its gold;
For even ruined dawn may bloom again—
And even caged, the brave bird’s tale is told.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 14, 2025 at 3:52 PM
A metaphoric narrative for the lost of freedom, emotional manipulation, and the resilience of the spirit. Experiencing oppression is both physically confining and psychologically damaging; nevertheless, its memory is irreplaceable, and the sense of hope is instinctive.
Volumes Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 12:55 AM
This is such a tender poem Jay. I was truly touched as I read it. Your words brought the bird to life for me as you painted a scene of emotions. You are a wonderful poet my friend. Thank you for bring such honest talent to Soup and us all
Goldsmith Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 1:58 PM
I enjoyed reading. Your wonderful "Bruised Maina Bird" write is powerful. Some how I could also see this as a person. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a Blessed day/weekend writing away..........
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