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Browsing the Antiques

In a store that sells antiques, The past is much alive, Including parts that we’d prefer Did somehow not survive. Some creepy dolls and ugly clothes And jewelry I’d not wear Forlornly grace the shelves without Their one-time savoir faire. But other items bring a smile Or memory to bear – A Popeye pin, some Beatles cards And much Fiestaware. Three typewriters with all their keys Sit Royally encased And lots of kitchen tools I wish I never had replaced. I troll the aisles quite aimlessly For if you want the truth, The only things I hope to find Are traces of my youth.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 4/26/2018 6:19:00 PM
Hello Ilene, we will not find traces of our youth in an antique shop. It won't be there. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 4/8/2018 9:01:00 PM
Ilene, I did not have time to pass go or collect $200 dollars. In the Monopoly Game of the Rhyme, this is my favorite all-time Rhyme Poem. Went straight to favs when I got to creepy dolls.
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Date: 4/9/2018 11:22:00 AM
Ha! Thank you for that lovely comment, Caren! So many of those dolls really creep me out...
Date: 4/6/2018 10:23:00 AM
Sometimes things jump out at you from an otherwise dull collection Ilene. I purchased an antique pendant and gold ring in this way and never regretted it. Browsing is always fun.
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Date: 4/5/2018 11:10:00 PM
If your hearing ringing in your ears, it's you ringing the bell. Such a joy to read your wonderful talent.
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Date: 4/5/2018 8:39:00 PM
Hello Ilene,I could spend hours in an antique shop. Wishing i could buy everything I like to have. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 4/5/2018 7:13:00 PM
I'm in your club, Ilene. When I see an antique shop or barn (in Maine) I have to stop and have a look. My specialty is old paintings, signed or not. I they are well done and the price is right, you'll find it in my collection. Love the last two lines in the last stanza.Antiques let us know how things once were. Wonderful poem. Thank you for looking up Christina's portrait. / M
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Date: 4/5/2018 7:03:00 PM
An exceptional one that rings true to life and pleasing to the ear and psyche, Ilene. Thank you for the treat.
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Date: 4/5/2018 5:28:00 PM
Another amazing write. As always perfectly rhymed and an interesting story! This is another FAV for me. I got to counting and this is number 22! I'm truly a fan. Keep up the good work!!!...pat
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Date: 4/5/2018 1:44:00 PM
Oh Ilene i adore browsing second hand and antique shops and the part about the kitchen tools is SO true:-) I just adore your clever rhymes my friend:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/5/2018 11:53:00 AM
Love this poem, Ilene. My sentiments exactly. :) ~ Artsie
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Date: 4/4/2018 8:48:00 PM
That last verse so true! Funny how people buy ugly things!
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Date: 4/4/2018 8:03:00 PM
Terrific creativity Ilene!! Great imagery.. Makes you think differently about browsing antiques... Bravo!!
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