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brownian haiku

brownian here I go~ haiku number one round and round my thoughts and the fan... full of air
plane up in air can hear it- touch the sky, why can't I?
dot to dot particles floating in light-- brownian again tap, tap, tap keyboard stuck~ so's my mind
brain food random pickings~ at least tummy's full
seesaw feet touch ground, mind up in air randomness birds,floor, scratch-- no idea
one more try now cars zoom will try 5/7/5
thoughts keep on knocking does one open door or not? nobody is home look outside window leaves say hi, also the bird I just smile back
somebody's whistling glad he's happy to do work... wait for 5 o'clock
handful of sand scatter it around... each one stings eyes
winds keep on wishing whispering their thoughts... but I can't translate
tiramisu smiles ^_^ spongy happiness... drunk with coffee drumbeats and heartbeats~ pounding thoughts too eighteen minutes in wonder if this fits? I hope so butt's now asleep but brain isn't... lucky butt think I went semi-crazy super random stuff here, went where my thoughts led me **for pd's contest haiku gone crazy--- ok, maybe me gone crazy
ooh wee I think one more can fit or maybe two?? lemme think
cold water splashes on my face--- wake up want one last funny one--- do I dare? ok hope it fits: CORN magic word?? fingers crossed--haha this is addictive it actually fit! squeeze one more oh btw--- butt haiku is my favorite

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Date: 11/29/2012 3:12:00 PM
I remember these and the fun you had with them, Nikko. Hey, I wish you would have seen my newest post instead of that silly christmas kyrielle. If you have time, check out my free verse. I hope it was ok for the contest! Hope to see you post a poem soon. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/29/2012 9:36:00 AM
Tiramisu smiles! ^_^ It's catchy! Awww, and so sweet! You know how I would like to taste those sweet cookies you keep sending me pics of, you're torturing me, always reminding me of tiramisu and stuff...Had fun reading these haikus and I bet you had fun writing them! :D
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Date: 10/12/2010 1:19:00 AM
Top marks for effort, better still for perfection. Nikko you are so wonderful. Harry
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Date: 10/11/2010 3:48:00 PM
This was a lot of fun, Nikko. Very clever with many great haiku verses. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/10/2010 5:00:00 PM
Hey Nikko! hi Nikko! Hope ikaw ay mabuti! Salamat sa lahat ng iyong mga komento uri! It is already very late so I will send you an email tomorrow. Have a great week! Ingat!...Gert:)
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Date: 10/9/2010 4:33:00 PM
I loved reading these Nikko, clever title too. The butt haiku is my favourite too, it made me laugh. I love the one with the leaves and the bird too. Congratulations on your win, you're racking them up...go girl!!! ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 10/8/2010 7:06:00 PM
Hi, Nikko! How are you stoping by to check out these haiku all over again..."corn" hum! lol,, love the word,. later p,d.
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Date: 10/8/2010 8:56:00 AM
Hi Nikko, missed to read so much of your recent poems, I'm sorry for that. Still have to arrange a lot here in my flat before my visitors will come. Didn't feel well today then I realized that my blood pressure was too low! Great series of Haikus!.And thank you for your kind comments!..Ingat!...Gert
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Date: 10/5/2010 7:59:00 PM
WAY TO GO, NIKKO!!! I really enjoyed my romp thru these haiku when I read them. GOOD FOR YOU. lUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/5/2010 2:43:00 PM
Congrats Nikko on your super win in the Haiku contest with these tremendous expressive Haikus my sweet friend... a worthy winner indeed ..enjoy with luv..
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Date: 10/5/2010 2:07:00 PM
LOL I love the idea that these are costumes!! How appropo an idea! Light & Love
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Date: 10/5/2010 1:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 10/5/2010 12:28:00 PM
fabulous , congrats on your second place win
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Date: 10/5/2010 12:27:00 PM
conratulations! Nikko, i should have know known this was yours when I read 'BRAIN FOOD' but it sliped my i thought yours was another entry..oi! boy was i wrong.. he he he! Congratulations and thanks for supporting my contest. I had lots of fun running this contest,.p.d.
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Date: 10/5/2010 12:09:00 PM
Congratulations Nikko on your win in P.D.'s contest *Going Haiku Crazy*. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/5/2010 12:08:00 PM
Congratulations on this well mdeserved win, Nikko
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Date: 10/5/2010 12:01:00 PM
yikers!!! best watch out our japanese friends don't decide to make fun of some Eglish form! and drop one of these a bombs on it? Is there such a thing as a truely English form Hmmm. If it was not called haiku I would have loved it, no matter I will blank out the word haiku in my mind and just love it for what it is a delightful romp through a teetertottering brain ;) Light & Love
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Date: 10/3/2010 1:13:00 PM
hahaha. YOu TRULY went crazy. What a unique approach. I must say, I liked them all, but I honestly LOVED at least half of them, whether haiku or not (and a few honestly were). A few of my super favs were Corn/ tiramisu/ winds(AWESOME)/ butt/ brain food and the five in a row coming after that one! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 10/3/2010 9:54:00 AM
Good job and very creative..Good luck in the crazy Haiku contest..Reads like a winner to me...Thanks for stopping by my blog..I appreciate the prayers that you have offered..Our son had to go through the VA to get his surgery because he has no insurance..This was at an army hospital and VA Physical Therapy medical..I don't know if they have more than one orthopedic surgeon...They said that they would call next week and let him know what to do..Our son has been out of work since Feb...Sara
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Date: 10/2/2010 9:40:00 PM
Good luck in the contest. I enjoyed reading all of these and it seems the rest did too. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 10/2/2010 9:57:00 AM
love them all especially lucky butt one lol !Take care~Deb
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Date: 10/2/2010 5:37:00 AM
Oh, haiku feast on varied themes and with varied images, enjoyed. Good luck if for the contest.
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Date: 10/2/2010 4:57:00 AM
butt naked craziness going on in this write and I love it!! Must be a winner!
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Date: 10/2/2010 4:26:00 AM
A winner by far!!!! I love it....
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