Brown Sugar

Looking back at all the years
I thought I found true love
‘Twas jus a play on my emotions and tears, 
Deep seated feeling of pain I can’t remove
For the sake of the love I thought I had
And the desire of every growing lad.

You touched my Heart in so many ways
To be sure an everlasting smile stays
Because you know how much it pays.
Can’t imagine the two of us apart
As you made me see a bright new start
Like a short from a sudden dart.

We shared the laughter and the pain
‘Cos we know we’ll surely go on
You’re like the only one I’ve ever known, 
The Best friend I’ve ever had
But as time is our friend, 
Our love will know no end.

I love the moment, 
Moments we shared together.
I love the feeling, 
Feelings of true love and care.
Thought I was dreaming
But it’s real.

Wish these moments will never leave my side
Knowing that true love is hard to find
Whatever it takes I will fight.
And though I travel far and wide, 
You’re always on my mind
Both day and night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 9/3/2012 10:03:00 AM
Well written poem Henry. Love it. Have a lovely new week. oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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