Brown Eyes

I fell mindlessly

into the depths of brown eyes

eyes that said one thing

while actions said another

I long to be fooled again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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April 2, 2013 at 11:16 PM
francine, this is the kind of poetry I adore. That longing kind of poetry in which you know it is to no avail and yet the sweet angst of it all. To make one sigh!!! WEll, time for beddie bye See ya later.
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