Brown Eyes

He played guitar in a Texas tavern -
Could have been famous but for her brown eyes.
He loved her more than his music could tell.
He smiled and played while he swallowed her lies.

There came a time when her brown eyes wandered -
Settled on a drifter from San Antone.
Now he plays guitar in Huntsville prison -
His brown eyed lover is sleeping alone.

He used to play in a Texas tavern -
Just a lowdown honky tonk so they say.
He had great talent 'til he did murder -
He let brown eyes and lies get in his way.

6-8-18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gentry Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 6:34 AM
Congratulations on your #1 win! You tell a story well. Well done! :)
Krampe Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 3:57 PM
Sounds like an old folk song, Larry.
Duet Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 10:27 PM
There's a country song in this poem somewhere...just needs a refrain. Thumbs up from me for sure!
Bradfield Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 3:22 PM
Thank you, Carole!
Man Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 8:37 AM
Great western story!!
Bradfield Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 10:34 PM
Thank you, Chance, and thanks for the visit!
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