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Brown Eyes

He played guitar in a Texas tavern - Could have been famous but for her brown eyes. He loved her more than his music could tell. He smiled and played while he swallowed her lies. There came a time when her brown eyes wandered - Settled on a drifter from San Antone. Now he plays guitar in Huntsville prison - His brown eyed lover is sleeping alone. He used to play in a Texas tavern - Just a lowdown honky tonk so they say. He had great talent 'til he did murder - He let brown eyes and lies get in his way. 6-8-18

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Date: 7/2/2018 6:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your #1 win! You tell a story well. Well done! :)
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Date: 7/1/2018 3:57:00 PM
Sounds like an old folk song, Larry.
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Date: 6/9/2018 10:27:00 PM
There's a country song in this poem somewhere...just needs a refrain. Thumbs up from me for sure!
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 6/17/2018 3:22:00 PM
Thank you, Carole!
Date: 6/9/2018 8:37:00 AM
Great western story!!
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 6/9/2018 10:34:00 PM
Thank you, Chance, and thanks for the visit!

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